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Array ( [sid] => 125627 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Breathe Sin-Blame it on Lust [time] => 2006-09-11 22:09:33 [hometext] => Something from my other sight... (it's form that it really is written in can't show up here btw) [bodytext] => `Oh god,`
Tempest told you everything.

~I’ve never been sober to the ocean.~

You strike me dead held fast in your arms,
By no judgment of my sins…


~Reveal my heart from behind the ruby curtain.~

`This for you dear god…`
Do kill me quick in sweet revenge.

~Threats by chance gambled away a currency in proud ribbons.~

:Bodies touching in hot rasping silk…:
`That could have been the fires of hell…but not to the affection.`

~A rose’s only lament is the tears she cries.~


That was my lover…
`But you purest in white lilies are my deity.`

~Hot ink spilled from my quill in forlorn manners staining my page of words.~

Within this blushing skin,
Lay an underestimated being…


~Infected smooth in ruthless slaughter and hollow sockets of one sigh.~

I detest this frame of mine…
`Spirit of creative life you planted for me in growing melody,`
Ashen skin burning sallow…
Two eyes in olive mist,

:Bowed to enjoy in mans eyes.:

~You are a rumor set solely in poison cherry bleeding apples.~

'Divinity you did not spare an unclothed manner,'
:To be desires envy…:
:Hungers undying thirst.:

~Am I lifeless numb in blank swallowed speech?~

Yet my sweet smile was to stay dry…untouched.
If I was to be bane with temperance you should have bore me…


~Unbind bitten rims in diamond edged desperation.~

If this blood lust was my mere sin…
`True my lord,`
We will all be cherished before we are condemned.

~I am not alone…~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 71 [informant] => red-lace-blue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )
I Breathe Sin-Blame it on Lust

Contributed by red-lace-blue on Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 10:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets



`Oh god,`
Tempest told you everything.

~I’ve never been sober to the ocean.~

You strike me dead held fast in your arms,
By no judgment of my sins…


~Reveal my heart from behind the ruby curtain.~

`This for you dear god…`
Do kill me quick in sweet revenge.

~Threats by chance gambled away a currency in proud ribbons.~

:Bodies touching in hot rasping silk…:
`That could have been the fires of hell…but not to the affection.`

~A rose’s only lament is the tears she cries.~


That was my lover…
`But you purest in white lilies are my deity.`

~Hot ink spilled from my quill in forlorn manners staining my page of words.~

Within this blushing skin,
Lay an underestimated being…


~Infected smooth in ruthless slaughter and hollow sockets of one sigh.~

I detest this frame of mine…
`Spirit of creative life you planted for me in growing melody,`
Ashen skin burning sallow…
Two eyes in olive mist,

:Bowed to enjoy in mans eyes.:

~You are a rumor set solely in poison cherry bleeding apples.~

'Divinity you did not spare an unclothed manner,'
:To be desires envy…:
:Hungers undying thirst.:

~Am I lifeless numb in blank swallowed speech?~

Yet my sweet smile was to stay dry…untouched.
If I was to be bane with temperance you should have bore me…


~Unbind bitten rims in diamond edged desperation.~

If this blood lust was my mere sin…
`True my lord,`
We will all be cherished before we are condemned.

~I am not alone…~




Copyright © red-lace-blue ... [ 2006-09-11 22:09:33]
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Re: I Breathe Sin-Blame it on Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 02:09:50 AM AEST
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Very entertaining write
I enjoyed it alot


Re: I Breathe Sin-Blame it on Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 03:25:49 AM AEST
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Interesting read, thanx for posting :-)




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