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Array ( [sid] => 125598 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yours [time] => 2006-09-11 04:40:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In a dimly lit room:
Candles flicker endlessly with the gentle breeze – blown upon the night air,
Bodies move in sync to passion’s rousing melody,
Shadows dancing along the walls mimicking every move,
Fingers splayed against naked flesh,
(Bodies tremble, lips quiver – knees buckle)
Hands gently exploring; fingertips - caressing slowly tracing, learning, memorizing (branding) every inch, every curve. . .
As lips meet in a tender embrace, sparks fly – I can feel the electricity coursing through me merely at touch,
Passions ignite . . . (souls) engulfed in flames raging much stronger than lust or desire,

Fingers straying; running through dark (auburn) locks,
Mesmerized – captivated . . . eyes fixated on much darker (steamy – smoldering brown bedroom) eyes,
(I want so badly to throw caution to the wind)
Hand trailing ever so lightly along your abdomen,
(Butterflies in my stomach – a ball of nerves wound too tight . . . an internal battle rages within - one part shyness; two parts nervous anticipation, two parts splendor and half jittery fear)
(My) Lips parted in a silent gasp,
Marveling at the raw sensations astir . . . from your body responding (beneath my hesitant - yet eager finger tips) stimulating - (tantalizing) as it is,

Whispers of a mere breath; sweet murmurs resounding upon yearning ears,
Lips upon flesh; limbs entwined . . . molded - merged together as one (heart) body and soul,
(In the early twilight hours the moon and the stars bare witness, as together we are one)
In this very instant I lost myself (so lost in my love; lust and desire for you) – enthralled in your beauty,

(Kneeling before you upon the bed) My eyes lock with yours – intensely searching,
(Shush…) A single finger placed gently against your pursed lips,
(Barely spoken even as a whisper)
I am yours (never shall I be any others) for tonight I give myself unto you,
(My heart knows naught of what yours seeks, but only of what it speaks)
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Yours

Contributed by Sahara on Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 04:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In a dimly lit room:
Candles flicker endlessly with the gentle breeze – blown upon the night air,
Bodies move in sync to passion’s rousing melody,
Shadows dancing along the walls mimicking every move,
Fingers splayed against naked flesh,
(Bodies tremble, lips quiver – knees buckle)
Hands gently exploring; fingertips - caressing slowly tracing, learning, memorizing (branding) every inch, every curve. . .
As lips meet in a tender embrace, sparks fly – I can feel the electricity coursing through me merely at touch,
Passions ignite . . . (souls) engulfed in flames raging much stronger than lust or desire,

Fingers straying; running through dark (auburn) locks,
Mesmerized – captivated . . . eyes fixated on much darker (steamy – smoldering brown bedroom) eyes,
(I want so badly to throw caution to the wind)
Hand trailing ever so lightly along your abdomen,
(Butterflies in my stomach – a ball of nerves wound too tight . . . an internal battle rages within - one part shyness; two parts nervous anticipation, two parts splendor and half jittery fear)
(My) Lips parted in a silent gasp,
Marveling at the raw sensations astir . . . from your body responding (beneath my hesitant - yet eager finger tips) stimulating - (tantalizing) as it is,

Whispers of a mere breath; sweet murmurs resounding upon yearning ears,
Lips upon flesh; limbs entwined . . . molded - merged together as one (heart) body and soul,
(In the early twilight hours the moon and the stars bare witness, as together we are one)
In this very instant I lost myself (so lost in my love; lust and desire for you) – enthralled in your beauty,

(Kneeling before you upon the bed) My eyes lock with yours – intensely searching,
(Shush…) A single finger placed gently against your pursed lips,
(Barely spoken even as a whisper)
I am yours (never shall I be any others) for tonight I give myself unto you,
(My heart knows naught of what yours seeks, but only of what it speaks)

Copyright Â© Sahara ... [ 2006-09-11 04:40:30]
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Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 09:30:47 PM AEST
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A fitting tribute to carnal passion .
Your writing provokes the
imagination. Lustful and powerful.
Truly , Doug

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:29:07 AM AEST
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But when it speaks, will you listen? Will you care, or merely believe what you choose to believe and think whatever you so choose?

It takes self descipline and dedication to actually put everything aside, your pride, your past, your feelings, everything, and just listen to what someone you love is saying and to take it into account without just jumping to conclusions. It takes love, to understand that maybe, everything you're thinking, is just a way to protect yourself from possibly being hurt, even though, that person would never intentionally hurt you.

It takes love, and open eyes and ears to realize that maybe you're not the only insecure person in the relationship. And that maybe, they have just as many inner thoughts and worries as yourself, but have difficultly, much like yourself, in putting everything behind them, and just trusting someone.

It takes love, true love, and dedication, and honesty, to care for someone indefinitely. And thats what love is, unconditional, never ending - sacrifice. And it's worth it. It just takes time.

Re: Yours (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 12:51:48 AM AEST
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I am yours (never shall I be any others) for tonight I give myself unto you,
(My heart knows naught of what yours seeks, but only of what it speaks)

My heart: I love you... and you don't need to believe me... cause I know I'm in this really *****ty place right now and I'd really rather you not see me like this. I don't even know if you love me anymore after everything... I'd understand you not being able to... I couldn't love someone like me - and I shouldn't ask you to. But I can't stop my feelings for you... I just need a change, and not you, but me... I think we both can agree on that. And just because we're not together - just because I went away... doesn't mean my feelings ever did.

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