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Array ( [sid] => 124978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Carefree Dream [time] => 2006-08-27 19:14:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

I was sitting in the stream...
Contemplating a dream...

I had so much time on my hands...
My toes flipping through the sands...

The thought of going places...
And seeing all the beautiful faces...

Meeting friends and enjoying time...
Pulling up roots at the drop of a dime...

Enjoying life and making no plans...
Just soaking up the sun and getting tans...

Maybe get my pole and throw in my hook...
And see just what is in that brook...

Or maybe I'll just sit carefree...
And think about the things I see...

No headaches... no worries...
No stress... no questions to appease...

I think of things that do not matter...
And the dreams begin to scatter...

I'm back in the world of noise and stress...
Wishing I again had that moment to caress..

When you think of things that have no reason...
Your life and your love changes season...

The world is full of sorrow and woes...
Why we are concerned, no one knows...

Think of things that take presidence...
Like love and joy and things that make sense...

And you find your life at peace...
And your darkened days will then seise...

Enjoy life...
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The Carefree Dream

Contributed by Oneir8dude on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 07:14:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems





I was sitting in the stream...
Contemplating a dream...

I had so much time on my hands...
My toes flipping through the sands...

The thought of going places...
And seeing all the beautiful faces...

Meeting friends and enjoying time...
Pulling up roots at the drop of a dime...

Enjoying life and making no plans...
Just soaking up the sun and getting tans...

Maybe get my pole and throw in my hook...
And see just what is in that brook...

Or maybe I'll just sit carefree...
And think about the things I see...

No headaches... no worries...
No stress... no questions to appease...

I think of things that do not matter...
And the dreams begin to scatter...

I'm back in the world of noise and stress...
Wishing I again had that moment to caress..

When you think of things that have no reason...
Your life and your love changes season...

The world is full of sorrow and woes...
Why we are concerned, no one knows...

Think of things that take presidence...
Like love and joy and things that make sense...

And you find your life at peace...
And your darkened days will then seise...

Enjoy life...




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Re: The Carefree Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 07:25:07 PM AEST
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so true, nice write, hope it inspires others to take control of their lifes and live fro the moment... carpe diem... carpe nocturne...
2sdyx


Re: The Carefree Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 08:01:41 PM AEST
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I like the cheerful attitude of your write.
I felt there. . . at the stream. Enjoying this
calming picture you have presented so well.

Laurie


Re: The Carefree Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 11:09:17 PM AEST
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It's so beautiful...it takes me to place you describe..where I want to be. Hope to read more of your poems :) K&H


Re: The Carefree Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 12:51:24 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC ... a nice first post that certainly belies your username. Nothing ir8 here. I enjoyed the wite. I did note a feew spelling errors ... but what the heck they happen to us all. I look forward to more from you.

Nazmythian ~


Re: The Carefree Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 08:55:16 PM AEST
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i love the Rhyme in this write and the way it flows. great job!!!


Re: The Carefree Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 12:39:01 PM AEST
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YEAH... I was finally able to get in and changed my terrible spelling errors.. Woohoo...
Ty All for your comments




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