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[sid] => 124562
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => International romance
[time] => 2006-08-16 21:24:02
[hometext] => Please read and help me refine this poem/these lyrics, I think they could be pretty good.
[bodytext] => burn a hole in me ignore my raging apathy touch my lips like you care you're so pretty, you're so fair dance with me all night long sing with me a pretty song my oh my i'm drunk on wine my oh my is that the time? is it time for me to go? have you finished your callous show? am i just horny and don't i care? do i just want to touch your hair? what does it matter if i'm stoned? will you leave me all alone? yeah you'll leave me all alone you're gonna catch that last bus home living on the other side of town but you bring me sunshine when i'm down digging away into this hole i'm not french or spanish or a pole just an english boy with something to prove kinda pis sed away my youth it's been fun, i enjoyed the ride though it torments me like a thorn in my side... i've got nothing to hide [comments] => 1 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jackman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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