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Array ( [sid] => 124439 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FIGHTING BACK [time] => 2006-08-14 07:00:19 [hometext] => YOU CAN WIN. [bodytext] => When your hit with depression, you learn a lesson,
that life is not as it seems,
your life is in shatters nothing now matters.
you cant fulfil all your dreams,

you try to pretend it will soon end,
as you try to climb out the pitt,
if it wasn't for family and all your friends,
you would give up say that is it,

one day you decide to try again,
your starting a fresh new day,,
you have been in the dark, your new life your start,
your demons have all gone away,

Do not be fooled depression has ruled,
it can always strike again,
you have to fight back dont let it attack,
from dark thoughts you have to refrain,

life is so short, try to abort,
the things that make you so sad,
move on with your life throw out the strife,
anything that makes you feel mad,

one day you will see, you can be free,
fly like a bird in the sky,
your happy at last the darkness has past,
your no longer wanting to die... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 19 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

FIGHTING BACK

Contributed by lillyjane on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:00:19 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

When your hit with depression, you learn a lesson,
that life is not as it seems,
your life is in shatters nothing now matters.
you cant fulfil all your dreams,

you try to pretend it will soon end,
as you try to climb out the pitt,
if it wasn't for family and all your friends,
you would give up say that is it,

one day you decide to try again,
your starting a fresh new day,,
you have been in the dark, your new life your start,
your demons have all gone away,

Do not be fooled depression has ruled,
it can always strike again,
you have to fight back dont let it attack,
from dark thoughts you have to refrain,

life is so short, try to abort,
the things that make you so sad,
move on with your life throw out the strife,
anything that makes you feel mad,

one day you will see, you can be free,
fly like a bird in the sky,
your happy at last the darkness has past,
your no longer wanting to die...

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2006-08-14 07:00:19]
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Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:11:17 AM AEST
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Very meanigfull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:55:44 AM AEST
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nicely done..i love the rhyme scheme!

wiz

Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_88 on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:13:29 PM AEST
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Hey There
This is a fantastic write and i love the flow.
Always a pleasure reading your poetry,
Cheers, Tara

Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by shinji_kusa on Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 02:57:56 PM AEST
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very good poem, i love the rhyming!

-jason

Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by Autumns_kiss on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 01:29:16 PM AEST
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I love the rhymes and the uplifting spirit of the poem. very nicely done :)

AK

Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:51:22 PM AEST
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Brilliant write Lilyjane, I loved the flow of this poem, it ryhmes so well and yet says so much. xx

Re: FIGHTING BACK (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 06:08:20 AM AEST
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I love a poem of inspiration and this is it...very wonderful write...great advice to anyone who can't find their way to happiness.
Life is so short, try to abort the things that make you so sad.
Exactly!

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