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Array ( [sid] => 124414 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn Between Two Worlds [time] => 2006-08-13 16:29:18 [hometext] => This poem is about me being torn between the person I was before and the person I am now.. Please comment on what you think. Thank you. [bodytext] => This being I see before me.
Someone who is torn between two worlds.
One which is in the world of conformists and clones.
Another which lies people who act themselves without putting on a mask.
Showing their true selves.
Not caring what anyone thinks.
That being I see before me.
Is myself.
Someone who used to be a conformist.
Someone who used wear a mask in order to fit in.
Now, that same being.
Someone who turned into someone who is different.
Someone who stands out.
This person who now feels torn.
Torn.
Torn between two worlds of conformists and the person who she wants to be. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => BabiBoricua314 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Torn Between Two Worlds

Contributed by BabiBoricua314 on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 04:29:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This being I see before me.
Someone who is torn between two worlds.
One which is in the world of conformists and clones.
Another which lies people who act themselves without putting on a mask.
Showing their true selves.
Not caring what anyone thinks.
That being I see before me.
Is myself.
Someone who used to be a conformist.
Someone who used wear a mask in order to fit in.
Now, that same being.
Someone who turned into someone who is different.
Someone who stands out.
This person who now feels torn.
Torn.
Torn between two worlds of conformists and the person who she wants to be.

Copyright © BabiBoricua314 ... [ 2006-08-13 16:29:18]
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Re: Torn Between Two Worlds (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 07:08:25 PM AEST
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I know what you mean.. good expressions.

Re: Torn Between Two Worlds (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 02:59:24 AM AEST
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i heard a line today, "we don't write in order to be understood, we write in order to understand". read you own poem. would you like to openly say that you're a person who wears a mask to fit it? think about it. you say you're torn. i dont see it.

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