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[title] => I will make it through
[time] => 2006-07-25 10:52:50
[hometext] => The attitude of going through tough times
[bodytext] => I ponder in the darkness
what I'll do in the light
I spend my lonely times
thinking what to do that''s right
I think in a new way
that i have not done before
I only hope i have the time
to face new life once more
My mistakes shadow o're me
and it is hard to dream
nightmares block out all the sun
and i barely see
But i will still move forward
by the gift and grace of God
I have faith i will make it through some how
Though the snow fills up the valley
freezing o're the plains of earth
the grass will still sway sweetly
when spring comes back to the earth
and as long as i am breathing
I have much great work to do
and i know some how
that i will make it through
My back's against the wall
and my heart is feeling blue
yet some how i know
that i will make it through
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I will make it through
Contributed by
Archie
on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 10:52:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I ponder in the darkness
what I'll do in the light
I spend my lonely times
thinking what to do that''s right
I think in a new way
that i have not done before
I only hope i have the time
to face new life once more
My mistakes shadow o're me
and it is hard to dream
nightmares block out all the sun
and i barely see
But i will still move forward
by the gift and grace of God
I have faith i will make it through some how
Though the snow fills up the valley
freezing o're the plains of earth
the grass will still sway sweetly
when spring comes back to the earth
and as long as i am breathing
I have much great work to do
and i know some how
that i will make it through
My back's against the wall
and my heart is feeling blue
yet some how i know
that i will make it through
Copyright ©
Archie
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2006-07-25 10:52:50]
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Re: I will make it through
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 12:42:48 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem Archie full of hope and faith. That is the best we can do when the storm clouds arrive is know that the sun and rainbows will be close behind. Thanks for the uplift!!
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Re: I will make it through
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 03:00:19 PM AEST
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| The sentiment here is nice to see. I liked the determination shown in this piece, I enjoyed reading it :) |
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Re: I will make it through
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 04:18:42 PM AEST
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Archie~
My dear friend it's great to see a new post by you. Chin up my dear friend you have come along way. You're a born fighter and you've had to fight really hard to get where you are today. I have the utmost faith in you dearest Archie~ Behind every dark cloud there is a silver lining. May God bless your beautiful heart and may He always shine a guiding light for you my dear friend. Here's to much brighter days ahead~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: I will make it through
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 04:56:46 PM AEST
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| i love the attitude that is brung out in this poem. lovely, absolutely lovely! |
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Re: I will make it through
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 02:52:45 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful, I can relate to it and reading it also gives inspiration, thanks its lovely. xxx |
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Re: I will make it through
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:33:23 AM AEST
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woo friend, sorry I haven't been reading or commenting but i been busy helpng out on the sight that i don't get much time to read-n-comment.
Friend,
I'm just a pm away if ya need a sholuder.
huggs, prayers, strehgth,
emy
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Re: I will make it through
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 04:34:40 PM AEST
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| A Beautiful write. Between all the darkness your still seeing the light and looking forward. Life isn’t always fair, but no matter how long and dark the tunnel, there is always light on the other side. Yes,you will make it through…you will.Thanks so much for sharing. Oceandreamer |
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Re: I will make it through
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 08:42:04 AM AEST
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Oh Archie how I enjoyed your thoughtful write.
Can you guess who is enjoying your poetry again, after all these many years?
I'm back Archie dear friend, and so glad I can once again........enjoy your reading your wonderful pen!
At 72, there's many times my back was against the wall..........like falling off a cliff.......600 feet below. On the way down you grab an old root............and you hear a silent voice in your head saying, "Let Go, Let Go....I'm down below, I'll not let you fall!"
This is one of those times Archie, just Have Faith.................and "Let Go!"
Warm love,
Lovingcritters
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Re: I will make it through
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 12:14:14 AM AEST
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a beautiful powerful message,
hugs n' love nessa |
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