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Array ( [sid] => 123200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where Does It Lead? [time] => 2006-07-15 03:39:27 [hometext] => This one's more like the usual me... [bodytext] => There’s this path that I follow, it leads to your door,
It’s run down and dirty, but I’ve walked it before,
It leaves me degraded, bedraggled and lost,
But still I stumble down it, prepared to pay the cost.

There’s this road that I walk down, it leads me to you,
It’s deserted and twisting, but I have to make do,
It makes me feel hollow, and empty inside,
But at least the road is clear; there’s nowhere left to hide.

There’s this tube that I’m riding, it leads to your street,
It’s hot and it’s sticky, and standing hurts my feet,
It leaves me so tired, and gasping for air,
But I’m thinking of my destination, and the fact that you wait there.

There’s these stairs that I’m climbing; they lead to your bed,
They’re old and they’re squeaky, so softly I tread,
The day has been hard, as has my journey home,
But as I climb in beside you, I’m glad I’m not alone. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Ruby2sdy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Where Does It Lead?

Contributed by Ruby2sdy on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:39:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

There’s this path that I follow, it leads to your door,
It’s run down and dirty, but I’ve walked it before,
It leaves me degraded, bedraggled and lost,
But still I stumble down it, prepared to pay the cost.

There’s this road that I walk down, it leads me to you,
It’s deserted and twisting, but I have to make do,
It makes me feel hollow, and empty inside,
But at least the road is clear; there’s nowhere left to hide.

There’s this tube that I’m riding, it leads to your street,
It’s hot and it’s sticky, and standing hurts my feet,
It leaves me so tired, and gasping for air,
But I’m thinking of my destination, and the fact that you wait there.

There’s these stairs that I’m climbing; they lead to your bed,
They’re old and they’re squeaky, so softly I tread,
The day has been hard, as has my journey home,
But as I climb in beside you, I’m glad I’m not alone.

Copyright Â© Ruby2sdy ... [ 2006-07-15 03:39:27]
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Re: Where Does It Lead? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:51:28 AM AEST
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AAAWwwwwwww this is so sweet, beautifull and a wee bit funny.
Great job.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Where Does It Lead? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 06:38:27 AM AEST
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Hey there.. thanks for commenting on my poems. i like this one a lot. i bet a fair few people can relate to this. chris.

Re: Where Does It Lead? (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:45:04 PM AEST
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Two words:

Absolutely stunning!

-Butch (speechless)
-Betrayer of Hope

Re: Where Does It Lead? (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 07:14:58 PM AEST
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great rhythm and rhyme-
It's nice to have that at the end of a long lourney home-

very nice~

B

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