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The promises erased into oblivion,
No more baby this, baby that,
The "I love you’s" can't be took back,

No more me, no more you, and no more “us”,
There won’t be anymore vying for one another’s trust,
No more of my boring inane conversation,
No more of that happiness - that’s so rare, no more of that odd sensation,

Now there’s nothing left for us,
Besides the obvious mistrust,
There won’t be anymore of this game,
For awhile I really thought you felt the same,

I’m more than a little jaded yes – but I do love you,
I just have no one left to tell it to,
I tried to change for you; but it’s obvious from my actions tonight – it’s just not something I can do,
I’m jealous, I’m petty this is true – but I’m not a complete fool
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The End

Contributed by Sahara on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:22:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The story has come to an end,
The promises erased into oblivion,
No more baby this, baby that,
The "I love you’s" can't be took back,

No more me, no more you, and no more “us”,
There won’t be anymore vying for one another’s trust,
No more of my boring inane conversation,
No more of that happiness - that’s so rare, no more of that odd sensation,

Now there’s nothing left for us,
Besides the obvious mistrust,
There won’t be anymore of this game,
For awhile I really thought you felt the same,

I’m more than a little jaded yes – but I do love you,
I just have no one left to tell it to,
I tried to change for you; but it’s obvious from my actions tonight – it’s just not something I can do,
I’m jealous, I’m petty this is true – but I’m not a complete fool

Copyright Â© Sahara ... [ 2006-07-15 02:22:51]
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Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:40:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but really well written.
I've been there more times than I'd ever say.
good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:48:16 AM AEST
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Guess this makes it twice. Glad to see you've found some inspiration, granted I'd wish if you ever wrote about me again, it could be on a happier note. I don't take back anything, except for all the stupid ***** I've done, none of which, were cheating on you. But why start believing me now, right?

You wouldn't be so jaded if you believed anything I said. If you actually ever listened to me, like you claim to. You can't fix something when only one person wants it to work, and this time - that one person wasn't you.

I still love you, and meant it when I said it.
Beautiful write, sad, but - beautiful.

I'm sorry, for everything I didn't do for you.

-Cassy

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 09:04:39 AM AEST
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A very nice read. Emotional and from the soul. Great write! Kimberly

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:48:23 PM AEST
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Wow... Your words just described the state where I've been struggling to get out of for 6 months now. Thanks! Great write!

-Butch
-Betrayer of Hope

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