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Array ( [sid] => 123020 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Standing on The Beach [time] => 2006-07-11 00:56:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We are standing on the beach
Watching the sunset slowly go down
With this slow blowing breeze
and waves rolling across our feet

With you standing so ever close
You in front and me just behind
With our hands so ever inter twined

With your hair blowing in my face
It smelling so ever saccharine
I loosen one hand reach up
And pull your hair aside

Then I lean my head so ever slightly
Towards your sweet smell neck
Then I begin to lightly kiss it
from top to bottom

I can notice the chill bumps
Across your exposed skin
You moan so ever slightly
As to give your approval

You softly curse my head
As to want me to continue
This so ever lightly kissing of the neck
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Standing on The Beach

Contributed by sadaddy on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 12:56:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We are standing on the beach
Watching the sunset slowly go down
With this slow blowing breeze
and waves rolling across our feet

With you standing so ever close
You in front and me just behind
With our hands so ever inter twined

With your hair blowing in my face
It smelling so ever saccharine
I loosen one hand reach up
And pull your hair aside

Then I lean my head so ever slightly
Towards your sweet smell neck
Then I begin to lightly kiss it
from top to bottom

I can notice the chill bumps
Across your exposed skin
You moan so ever slightly
As to give your approval

You softly curse my head
As to want me to continue
This so ever lightly kissing of the neck

Copyright © sadaddy ... [ 2006-07-11 00:56:31]
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Re: Standing on The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:08:09 AM AEST
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Reminds me of Daytona Beach 1988.
Very good writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Standing on The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:31:08 AM AEST
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I could almost Imagine being there.....

Re: Standing on The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:44:22 AM AEST
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I could imagine being there to beautiful poem xx

Re: Standing on The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 12:32:13 PM AEST
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How lovely... took me away, just for a moment...

2sdyx

Re: Standing on The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:20:29 AM AEST
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Nice write, beautiful moments, got lost in those lines like everyone else here!!

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