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Array ( [sid] => 122995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''WHAT DO I DO WITH THESE FEELINGS''.....Tanya & Ben [time] => 2006-07-10 14:22:01 [hometext] => co/wrote with my very good friend Ben [bodytext] => My heart is broke, my mind in turmoil
a love once shared now a total loss
I can never retrieve the moments shared
their now embedded in place
nothing more than a memory
soon to be erased

Im suffocating with pain
breathless and now alone
where do I lay this love
now i've no one to call my own

What do I do with these feelings
the ones that you gave to me
the ones that were ours
are now wilted flowers
and I thought we were meant to be

Yes what do I do with these feelings
the ones that my heart know so well
that place that we once called heaven
since you've gone I now, call it hell [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sweetoccasion29 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

''WHAT DO I DO WITH THESE FEELINGS''.....Tanya & Ben

Contributed by sweetoccasion29 on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 02:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My heart is broke, my mind in turmoil
a love once shared now a total loss
I can never retrieve the moments shared
their now embedded in place
nothing more than a memory
soon to be erased

Im suffocating with pain
breathless and now alone
where do I lay this love
now i've no one to call my own

What do I do with these feelings
the ones that you gave to me
the ones that were ours
are now wilted flowers
and I thought we were meant to be

Yes what do I do with these feelings
the ones that my heart know so well
that place that we once called heaven
since you've gone I now, call it hell

Copyright © sweetoccasion29 ... [ 2006-07-10 14:22:01]
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Re: ''WHAT DO I DO WITH THESE FEELINGS''.....Tanya & Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:10:23 PM AEST
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An honest piece, and a nice read,

2sdyx

Re: ''WHAT DO I DO WITH THESE FEELINGS''.....Tanya & Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 09:39:33 AM AEST
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Very soft spoken, and in depth poem. We've all had that kind of love at some point in our lives, that is lost somehow. It's good to for you to get it out and down on paper, it helps release the pain. nice write! Take care, Kimberly

Re: ''WHAT DO I DO WITH THESE FEELINGS''.....Tanya & Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:53:05 PM AEST
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Tanya & Ben, i have read some beautiful poems here and I can honestly say this one takes the award.You 2 are a great pair of writers I mean this from the bottom of my heart...

Re: ''WHAT DO I DO WITH THESE FEELINGS''.....Tanya & Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by chulysnacky on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 09:04:09 PM AEST
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good write. I enjoyed it, it was beautiful.

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