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Thou are the object of my desire,
The very bearing on my soul,
Thy beauty is within thine eyes,
Thou love doth make me whole,

Thy passion arouses my senses so,
When thine body is close to mine,
Thy lips I kiss, what heavenly bliss,
And in earnest our bodies entwine,

Thy beauty shines out like the stars,
Thy love like summer sun,
Thee are the reason I may live,
For thou art my precious one. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jerseysue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

True Thoughts My Precious One

Contributed by jerseysue on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Thou are the object of my desire,
The very bearing on my soul,
Thy beauty is within thine eyes,
Thou love doth make me whole,

Thy passion arouses my senses so,
When thine body is close to mine,
Thy lips I kiss, what heavenly bliss,
And in earnest our bodies entwine,

Thy beauty shines out like the stars,
Thy love like summer sun,
Thee are the reason I may live,
For thou art my precious one.

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-07-05 16:12:52]
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Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:57:06 PM AEST
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Well, you definitely succeeded!!!! Very sweet, and positively glowing with romance!!! Good one!

2sdyx

Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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Oh, please, please, please, don't under estimate yourself. This is very romantic, sensual, and very lovely.

I think it's an awesome poem.

Tim
(who's favorite poems to read are love poems and this one certainly was a joy to read)

Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:09:01 PM AEST
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nicely done!

wiz

Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:10:34 PM AEST
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OK this is excellant, I feel you write well on any subject that you chose! Nice flow, just lovely.

Michelle

Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST
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very well done

Shari

Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 03:10:32 AM AEST
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Its beautiful Sue, as all your poems are, you dont have to try your so talented.. xxx

Re: True Thoughts My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 08:44:47 PM AEST
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See? With all these kinds of reviews, it's got to be the top of the mountains for you. Nothing less would do. Great job. Thank you for sharing wrdz

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