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Bathe me in your light
Or drown me in the dark
Water is my lubricant
In this world of dirt
Where sinners live a happy life
Presenting their bodies freely
They share one another
I am only yours
You are forever mine
You touch my naked breast
This blesséd union
Wash me clean again
And hold me by the hand
Together we are pure
Among such corruption
We have lain in the river
Of innocence
Cleansed our souls
All we can do now
Is keep from burning
Doused in love
Not in lust
We are born again.

KarlaMarie [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 62 [informant] => KarlaMarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )
Water

Contributed by KarlaMarie on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 02:29:16 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



I should put it in religious poetry perhaps, but it wouldnt feel right...

Bathe me in your light
Or drown me in the dark
Water is my lubricant
In this world of dirt
Where sinners live a happy life
Presenting their bodies freely
They share one another
I am only yours
You are forever mine
You touch my naked breast
This blesséd union
Wash me clean again
And hold me by the hand
Together we are pure
Among such corruption
We have lain in the river
Of innocence
Cleansed our souls
All we can do now
Is keep from burning
Doused in love
Not in lust
We are born again.

KarlaMarie



Copyright © KarlaMarie ... [ 2006-06-29 02:29:16]
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Re: Water (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 03:00:54 AM AEST
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A lovely written poem.
Return to innocence by cleansing of the soul. It's always beautiful.

sadaddy


Re: Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 05:53:26 AM AEST
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Very beautiful poem!

~D~




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