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that much is true.
Slightly odd, a little starnge,
completely unlike you.
If you are considered to be normal;
with your hate, war, crime, abuse, drugs and adultry,
then what, honestly, do you expect me to do?
You've called me Lost,
and prayed for my soul.
I pity your 18th centuary closed mindedness
and allow you to carry on "helping" me in your own special way.
I have no religion, only my Faith.
This (me), it seems, you can neither comprehend or accept.
If you're the kind of person that gets into Heaven...
give me Hell anyday.
I'd rather remain a Heathen,
Pagan,
Lost Soul,
If being "normal" or being "saved"
means being a hypocite like you.

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Lost Soul?

Contributed by Aeris030388 on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 04:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I've always been different,
that much is true.
Slightly odd, a little starnge,
completely unlike you.
If you are considered to be normal;
with your hate, war, crime, abuse, drugs and adultry,
then what, honestly, do you expect me to do?
You've called me Lost,
and prayed for my soul.
I pity your 18th centuary closed mindedness
and allow you to carry on "helping" me in your own special way.
I have no religion, only my Faith.
This (me), it seems, you can neither comprehend or accept.
If you're the kind of person that gets into Heaven...
give me Hell anyday.
I'd rather remain a Heathen,
Pagan,
Lost Soul,
If being "normal" or being "saved"
means being a hypocite like you.





Copyright © Aeris030388 ... [ 2006-06-28 16:04:32]
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Re: Lost Soul? (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 04:15:37 PM AEST
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a child of sacrifice
of one other
inside so much diff
yet need to be the same
looked in them
for company
from those who dont understand
hurts yeah
they can take away so easy
and just walk away
makes you think who am i
but
we r many yet so few
walk amongst same yet so far away
time my friend
take it in your stride
you will have your day

MindSeT


Re: Lost Soul? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 12:13:24 AM AEST
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It doesn't - It's a terrible pity that there is so much hypocrisy... but then, the Christian ideal is one we're always going to fall short of. A real Christian will own up to that, though, and do his best. No doubt pride is the root of the situation with this person. Learn to read pride in people's ways, if you can, and you'll be spared a lot of trouble. But don't make the mistake of equating a certain belief with pride. It's both more complex and simpler than that.

Andrew


Re: Lost Soul? (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST
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Your soul is the only thing in this world that truly belongs to you, so noone else can save it but you...

I'd say: go your own way and do what YOU feel is right. But I suppose that's already exactly what you're doing :)

Hugs,

~D~




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