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Fall directly from the sky
It fell into my hands
The weightless figures
That glistened around me, consumed me
Destroying the remains of my life
That used to be so life-filled
Now so lifeless
So Insecure without her
There's nothing left to do
When this blood bleeds through
These Dying hands
That once covered my face as I cried
Ashamed of the feelings that embrace my mind
Ashamed of the feelings that were left behind
And this blood bleeds through
My dying hands
What have I done?
Where Did I go wrong?
"So fell another one"
Were the words that they sung
Those were the words that were mourned
In this orchard of time and memory
Tonight the harvest moon
Fell directly from the sky
It fell for the words
That she silently cried
On this night that faithlessly died
In this orchard of time and memory [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Lucid_Tides [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Orchard of Time and Memory

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:00:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tonight I watched the harvest moon
Fall directly from the sky
It fell into my hands
The weightless figures
That glistened around me, consumed me
Destroying the remains of my life
That used to be so life-filled
Now so lifeless
So Insecure without her
There's nothing left to do
When this blood bleeds through
These Dying hands
That once covered my face as I cried
Ashamed of the feelings that embrace my mind
Ashamed of the feelings that were left behind
And this blood bleeds through
My dying hands
What have I done?
Where Did I go wrong?
"So fell another one"
Were the words that they sung
Those were the words that were mourned
In this orchard of time and memory
Tonight the harvest moon
Fell directly from the sky
It fell for the words
That she silently cried
On this night that faithlessly died
In this orchard of time and memory

Copyright © Lucid_Tides ... [ 2006-06-27 23:00:17]
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Re: Orchard of Time and Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:32:39 PM AEST
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wow good job! I especially like the last six lines. lovely. keep it up!

Re: Orchard of Time and Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:43:44 PM AEST
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WoW, This is so impressive Lucid. Deep, dark, powerful you make the reader feel the emotions of the writer. I'm becoming a real fan of ur writes.
You can draw in ur reader and captivate them from beginning to end. It's a pleasure visiting ur pages for I'm always impressed with the contents. Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Orchard of Time and Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:39:39 AM AEST
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wow this is impressive!! I love the flow and its written so beautifully!! thanks for sharing awesome write

**HAunted_soul

JENNITTUDE

Re: Orchard of Time and Memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:56:11 PM AEST
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This is so deep and so beautiful. Well done. - Roxanne.

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