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Array ( [sid] => 12242 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => lost...... [time] => 2003-02-09 00:20:00 [hometext] => nothing lasts forever;
even love's a lie,
A tool for manipulation.
There's no God beyond the sky [bodytext] => They say that love will last forever
then why so many broken families.......

broken hearts........

broken children

don't you see what you've done?

and they call us the superior race.......

not even rats hurt their offspring as you've done me

I know you see

you understand and show no remorse

no words can explain what you've done

no name is foul enough to call you

you see you know you do

and you pretend

but I see through the fogs of pretending

I see your inside face

it's something that you're pretending can not hide

tell yourself what you want

maybe if you say it enough you'll begin to believe

that's what you want isn't it?

to believe you were the adult

and the good parent

so keep saying it as many times as you need

eventually you'll convince yourself of it

but here I'll be sitting

and I'll know the truth

I'll never be like you

keep dreaming

you know what you've done and you live a dream

I hope the dream suits you

all I want your life to be is a living nightmare

a living hell

I pray for it everyday

I don't care if I damn myself in doing so

you deserve all harm that falls upon you

think what you want of me

I see the real you

and one day......

maybe after never

the rest will see you too

you'll be cast out and alone

even after never it'll please me

to see you get what you deserve

I hope you listened carefully



----Destiny

Jan. 8, 2002
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Destiny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
lost......

Contributed by Destiny on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



They say that love will last forever
then why so many broken families.......

broken hearts........

broken children

don't you see what you've done?

and they call us the superior race.......

not even rats hurt their offspring as you've done me

I know you see

you understand and show no remorse

no words can explain what you've done

no name is foul enough to call you

you see you know you do

and you pretend

but I see through the fogs of pretending

I see your inside face

it's something that you're pretending can not hide

tell yourself what you want

maybe if you say it enough you'll begin to believe

that's what you want isn't it?

to believe you were the adult

and the good parent

so keep saying it as many times as you need

eventually you'll convince yourself of it

but here I'll be sitting

and I'll know the truth

I'll never be like you

keep dreaming

you know what you've done and you live a dream

I hope the dream suits you

all I want your life to be is a living nightmare

a living hell

I pray for it everyday

I don't care if I damn myself in doing so

you deserve all harm that falls upon you

think what you want of me

I see the real you

and one day......

maybe after never

the rest will see you too

you'll be cast out and alone

even after never it'll please me

to see you get what you deserve

I hope you listened carefully



----Destiny

Jan. 8, 2002




Copyright © Destiny ... [ 2003-02-09 00:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: lost...... (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:26:44 AM AEST
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Very powerful write. Took a lot of courage.
Good luck in moving forward.


Re: lost...... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:30:59 PM AEST
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Dear Destiny, I hope that this helped you get a moment of anger out so you could be done with it. Such bitter feelings hurt you more than anyone else. We ALL are disappointed by our parents at sometime ... and as parents, we ALL will disappoint our children for not being as perfect as they think we should be.
Let me tell you a secret. Parents can't be just what you wish they were. They are human, may love you alot, but just are not capable.
I take it that you have not found God yet. I hope you do. With love, Great-grandma Bizzy


Re: lost...... (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:14:40 AM AEST
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wow a bitter pill this one

but a great write well done

peace be your journey

terry


Re: lost...... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 11:33:56 AM AEST
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I think that it's the best poem that i have ever dedicated to my ex-boyfriend!


Re: lost...... (User Rating: 1 )
by crimsonbatlady on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:06:35 AM AEST
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Umm, I hope that you're not passing off the first few lines as your own...
Because I have read a book that uses that quote... And I'm sure that you aren't the person that the author took it from.
:|





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