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Array ( [sid] => 122021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moving on [time] => 2006-06-20 02:43:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’ve been thinking all these weeks
That every beginning has an ending
Nothing good for me can be true
That one day you will realize, Im not worth your time
And you will no longer love me, and something better you will find

You deserve so much more
Then all I have to give
All I have to give you is my love and care
But you should have and need someone better than me
Someone you can love and trust, a girl that you need

Inside me I’m trying to accept
That one day you’re going to move on
I think the truth scares me the most
But as much as I try to accept it, I can’t change or deny
That I will always love you

When that day rises
And you seem to let me go
Although I will not be ready
I will never forget the wonderful memories of us
And wish you all the best
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 24 [informant] => mali [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Moving on

Contributed by mali on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 02:43:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I’ve been thinking all these weeks
That every beginning has an ending
Nothing good for me can be true
That one day you will realize, Im not worth your time
And you will no longer love me, and something better you will find

You deserve so much more
Then all I have to give
All I have to give you is my love and care
But you should have and need someone better than me
Someone you can love and trust, a girl that you need

Inside me I’m trying to accept
That one day you’re going to move on
I think the truth scares me the most
But as much as I try to accept it, I can’t change or deny
That I will always love you

When that day rises
And you seem to let me go
Although I will not be ready
I will never forget the wonderful memories of us
And wish you all the best

Copyright Â© mali ... [ 2006-06-20 02:43:36]
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Re: Moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:18:32 AM AEST
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A little bit ambiguous isn't it? You say that the only thing that you can give is love and then you say that he deserves someone better than you... How you can love someone when you don't even love yourself is beyond me. In order to be able to give love you must have it...

There are only 2 primal emotions in this world and those are love and fear... You act either out of love or out of fear and you seem to be acting out of the latter... You fear, you lose...

Anyway, that's my personal humble opinion.

Take care!

~Davinah~

Re: Moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by myselfindreams on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 11:55:42 AM AEST
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now now, come out of it, you are worth much. Good write, in fact lots of nice memories for me, a good poem this is

Re: Moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by myselfindreams on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 11:56:58 AM AEST
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davinah is correct happened to glance at comment on my way out. be good, happiness to you

Re: Moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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Amazing poem
but you shouldn't think of yourself in this way
the greatest gift you can ever offer anyone is LOVE and if this person cant appricate that then they are not worth the bother.
Keep your head up and best wishes to you.

~*Eve*~

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