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Array ( [sid] => 121979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Chance [time] => 2006-06-19 12:03:45 [hometext] => Jeff this poem is for you <3 [bodytext] => You were in my head and in my heart,
But there was a world of reasons for us to be apart,
Then one night my dream came true,
And you looked up and told me you like me too,
Now there is nothing that will get you out of my head,
Just when things were getting so great you love her instead,
I never should have asked something I didn't want to know,
Your girlfriend is your love and it's time for me to let go,
But I will never forget that terrific night,
Because for a second I thought I would forever hold you tight,
I fell asleep my arms around yours and yours around me,
And when I woke up you were what I could see,
But the liquor was gone and it all clicked in,
I knew right then and there it wouldn't happen again,

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 22 [informant] => shyness [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

No Chance

Contributed by shyness on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 12:03:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You were in my head and in my heart,
But there was a world of reasons for us to be apart,
Then one night my dream came true,
And you looked up and told me you like me too,
Now there is nothing that will get you out of my head,
Just when things were getting so great you love her instead,
I never should have asked something I didn't want to know,
Your girlfriend is your love and it's time for me to let go,
But I will never forget that terrific night,
Because for a second I thought I would forever hold you tight,
I fell asleep my arms around yours and yours around me,
And when I woke up you were what I could see,
But the liquor was gone and it all clicked in,
I knew right then and there it wouldn't happen again,

Copyright © shyness ... [ 2006-06-19 12:03:45]
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Re: No Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by wolf_tamer on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 02:05:20 PM AEST
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that sux that u arn't together. i've never been in that situation before, so i can't say much to help with that.
anyways.. this had a very nice flow. and i enjoyed reading it. great job.
~wolf~

Re: No Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:13:26 AM AEST
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Aha! The perils of adultary :)

I have been in that kind of situation more than once... I keep making the same mistake apparently :)

Goes to show: the best guys are taken, aren't they?

Very nice write!

~Davinah~

Re: No Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by lovestruck on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 10:37:00 PM AEST
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i've never been in this kind of situation but reading it and feeling the emotion in this poem made my heart almost hurt like i had been... very very good emotion! great write

lovestruck

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