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Array ( [sid] => 121946 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Autumn Wolves [time] => 2006-06-18 18:17:38 [hometext] => This is actually a song I wrote in my current project, Flesh Burnt to Ashes. It's a fantasy poem/lyric that gives great detail on the hurt in losing something or someone one loves, even though it was greatly needed. Greatest Poems of the Western world. [bodytext] => Autumn Wolves

It was a full moon that night
Unholy nights like these
They stalk through the flowing leaves
Benieth the howling breeze
They lust for holy hearts
Onward to death they march
A starving god upon the wolves

Autumn has never seemed so sad
In this perfect world

You'll feel your heart seize...
You'll feel your blood freeze...

Autumn has never seemed so right
Amoung the werewolf's bite

A normal being
Transformed by the bite
Only changing on a fullmoon night
There's no breaking this oath
But only breaking his heart..
With a kiss of a silver bullet

I surrender
For the bullet seals my fate
Autumn renders
With a sliver plated stake

That laid me to sleep, eternally

It's something I can't take anymore
Give the bullet a head start
Engrave your name in the silver
So you can run through my heart
One last time
Before I close my eyes, forever..

As the bullet enters
The wolf in me will die
My human side will fall
With nothing left in my eyes

When I dream
My spirit's freed
From a choke hold of belief
When I dream
I could only scream
Life was agony
As I dream
Only As I dream
Life was perfect
I died so perfect [comments] => 7 [counter] => 324 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Lucid_Tides [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
Autumn Wolves

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 06:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Autumn Wolves

It was a full moon that night
Unholy nights like these
They stalk through the flowing leaves
Benieth the howling breeze
They lust for holy hearts
Onward to death they march
A starving god upon the wolves

Autumn has never seemed so sad
In this perfect world

You'll feel your heart seize...
You'll feel your blood freeze...

Autumn has never seemed so right
Amoung the werewolf's bite

A normal being
Transformed by the bite
Only changing on a fullmoon night
There's no breaking this oath
But only breaking his heart..
With a kiss of a silver bullet

I surrender
For the bullet seals my fate
Autumn renders
With a sliver plated stake

That laid me to sleep, eternally

It's something I can't take anymore
Give the bullet a head start
Engrave your name in the silver
So you can run through my heart
One last time
Before I close my eyes, forever..

As the bullet enters
The wolf in me will die
My human side will fall
With nothing left in my eyes

When I dream
My spirit's freed
From a choke hold of belief
When I dream
I could only scream
Life was agony
As I dream
Only As I dream
Life was perfect
I died so perfect




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Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 06:38:26 PM AEST
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Winter old to be the summer blues
Shall we question
Resone a person
Inside a suggestion


Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:49:36 PM AEST
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you've put a new twist on an otherwise overdone subject, the werewolf them makes it a good read


Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 10:03:59 PM AEST
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awesome write!

wiz


Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 08:07:23 AM AEST
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When I dream
My spirit's freed
From a choke hold of belief
When I dream
I could only scream
Life was agony

i really like that.
great job on this


Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 01:44:29 AM AEST
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Another intriguing write, full of colourful words and ideas.

I really enjoyed the following lines:
"They lust for holy hearts
Onward to death they march
A starving god upon the wolves"
(Especially the last line)

The whole piece had a warm nostalgic feel to it...seasonal and reminiscent of past lives, despite its melancholy undertone.

"With a kiss of a silver bullet"
It gave me joy to dwell in this concept.
Reminded me of "Underworld".
Both forms of creatures are equally appealing.

"For the bullet seals my fate
Autumn renders
With a sliver plated stake"

-Well expressed metaphoric language.

"Give the bullet a head start
Engrave your name in the silver
So you can run through my heart"

-Heartwrenchingly bitter-sweet.

And the last stanza...well! What can i say?
I am merely blown away!

Stunning!



Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 11:09:12 PM AEST
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Lucid~
A most fascinating and intriguing write.
Your work is captivating and so impressive. A very skilled poetic whose talent shines radiantly through his outstanding and remarkable work. Hats off to ya LT~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m


Re: Autumn Wolves (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:54:08 AM AEST
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Very good write. I always enjoy werewolf stories with a twist.




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