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Array ( [sid] => 12128 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => weak from want [time] => 2003-02-07 21:20:00 [hometext] => thank you kind sir
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [bodytext] => your words leave me weak from want
in my dreams
the cravings and hunger intensify
now exposed to the provocative voices
that keep repeating your words

surrendering....surrendering...
totally to the experience
floating upon the seas of pleasures
down into the very depths of my desirous wants
soaring above the rhythmic waves
to an unbelievable height
body arches
arms stretched skyward
head thrown back
a shout of such gratitude - yes, Yes,YES! BRILLIANT!!!

i awake to cat-like stretches, purring
throaty groans mixed with soulful murmurs
a pleasurable hum remains in my head
what sweet dreams you have evoked
i thank you kind sir

another glorious day awaits...
i greet it now with love in my heart
and a
smile on my face. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 43 [informant] => roisin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

weak from want

Contributed by roisin on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

your words leave me weak from want
in my dreams
the cravings and hunger intensify
now exposed to the provocative voices
that keep repeating your words

surrendering....surrendering...
totally to the experience
floating upon the seas of pleasures
down into the very depths of my desirous wants
soaring above the rhythmic waves
to an unbelievable height
body arches
arms stretched skyward
head thrown back
a shout of such gratitude - yes, Yes,YES! BRILLIANT!!!

i awake to cat-like stretches, purring
throaty groans mixed with soulful murmurs
a pleasurable hum remains in my head
what sweet dreams you have evoked
i thank you kind sir

another glorious day awaits...
i greet it now with love in my heart
and a
smile on my face.

Copyright © roisin ... [ 2003-02-07 21:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem and I get to be the first to read it!!!

mckayla

Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:42:41 PM AEST
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mmm mmm just beautiful rosie! ;o)

Larry

Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:00:50 PM AEST
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its paints very nice, i like it alot.

Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:51:37 AM AEST
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very good i lke it

Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 08:44:22 AM AEST
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nice!!

Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 09:49:32 AM AEST
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excellent... the imagery and underlying tones of this poem have me craving more... wonderful poem!

Re: weak from want (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 06:10:39 PM AEST
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ohhh nice one - i love when that happens -

merry

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