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I wrote this again for my family! [bodytext] => Are you testing me or am I testing you,
No one seems to know,
Little secrets behind my back,
Yet I'm doing the same,
Are we playing a game to see who will break first, who is the one that will cry?
I'm tierd of these games I just want this to end,
Someones going to get hurt through this,
I know it will probably be me,
You are stronger than I ever was,
I know I'll fall apart after all is through,
Funny how things work sometimes,
I'm not yet sure how or why,
playing games can really hurt,
that really bothers me,
but it helps me grow,
to understand our lifes changes,
to think we use to get along,no secrets at all,
now were adults playing games,
snickering behind each others back,
Not caring who gets hurt,
or who will cry,
A testing of the mind!

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A testing of the mind!

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Are you testing me or am I testing you,
No one seems to know,
Little secrets behind my back,
Yet I'm doing the same,
Are we playing a game to see who will break first, who is the one that will cry?
I'm tierd of these games I just want this to end,
Someones going to get hurt through this,
I know it will probably be me,
You are stronger than I ever was,
I know I'll fall apart after all is through,
Funny how things work sometimes,
I'm not yet sure how or why,
playing games can really hurt,
that really bothers me,
but it helps me grow,
to understand our lifes changes,
to think we use to get along,no secrets at all,
now were adults playing games,
snickering behind each others back,
Not caring who gets hurt,
or who will cry,
A testing of the mind!

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-02-07 21:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A testing of the mind! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:58:50 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write here. I know the feeling well. I hate for a man to put me thru test. Guess that's why I'm along. Personally I threw in the towel and let him go test somebody else. Ha.
I just realized that the games well, don't got enuff daylite to fight with someones head games.....Oh i use to be the world's worst for getting even but then I realized I was only hurting myself....This was way back down the road back there, thank God..
Hang tough and I'm sure you'll get thru with flying colers. Knowing is half the battle.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy
Very good write!

Re: A testing of the mind! (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:42:36 AM AEST
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i found it, that is very nice, you seem to be able to keep it together, mine always get soggy in a way, i will vote for it to.

Re: A testing of the mind! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:48:33 PM AEST
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i always care if someone gets hurt, and am as truthful as i can be, i don't like people who are not genuine either..........

Re: A testing of the mind! (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 02:12:43 PM AEST
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Christina, start each day new and fresh, those yesterday's are far from today, look at yourself, and believe in you, let no-one pull you down, life is to short, you should write on "Are you Blind" for your family, and send it to them, my thoughts,

Re: A testing of the mind! (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:58:55 AM AEST
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great poem
wonderful write , i hate the games people play

peace be your journey

terry

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