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Array ( [sid] => 121093 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The One [time] => 2006-06-01 01:04:15 [hometext] => i wrote it right now [bodytext] => torn by the one
who i thought would care
rocking back and forth
crying in my chair
i thought you were different
from all those other girls
but it seems i was wrong again
because you've destroyed my world
these tears aren't helping me
in removing your image from my mind
so i decide to fix that problem
by cutting my wrists with this knife
i've cut so deep
that there's a steady stream
i wanted us to always be
why'd you have to leave
i'm losing blood fast
and i pass out on the floor
but before i go
i'd like to see you once more
i thought you were the one for me
and i see that i was wrong
now that i'm dying
i'm glad that you're gone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 301 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The One

Contributed by lonely_boy on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 01:04:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

torn by the one
who i thought would care
rocking back and forth
crying in my chair
i thought you were different
from all those other girls
but it seems i was wrong again
because you've destroyed my world
these tears aren't helping me
in removing your image from my mind
so i decide to fix that problem
by cutting my wrists with this knife
i've cut so deep
that there's a steady stream
i wanted us to always be
why'd you have to leave
i'm losing blood fast
and i pass out on the floor
but before i go
i'd like to see you once more
i thought you were the one for me
and i see that i was wrong
now that i'm dying
i'm glad that you're gone

Copyright © lonely_boy ... [ 2006-06-01 01:04:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The One (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:06:06 AM AEST
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heart-wrenching....i love all your writes, but they're always so tragic, good luck getting better.

~natalya

Re: The One (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 05:21:40 PM AEST
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nice, very honest.

2sdy

Re: The One (User Rating: 1 )
by GemmaLouiseRose on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 07:56:51 PM AEST
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honesty is the best policy

times are hard, and ur expression is fantastic, keep doing it. x

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