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Array ( [sid] => 121091 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rain of Ashes [time] => 2006-05-31 23:55:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A rain of ashes
keeps us from truth.
Its raining ashes
through a sky
that is not blue.

Bring me a bottle
i'll catch them for you.
Follow the wind
you'll see them too.

Is this a real story
if the dream is not true?
Well trash me through Glory
when Sorrow is through.

Poison your lover,
darken her hue,
watch her soul hover,
she was late for her que.

Follow the rhythym
with a rhyme and a verse.
Do you feel safe with him
with a mind so perverse?

Cry to your god
that will act in reverse.
No power will help you
get rid of this curse.

Escape from this place
with no time and no space.
Remember the ashes
will soon strangle you.

Wipe away the dew
that stains through your face,
feel your pain burn you
for falling from grace.

Convert your requiem to a hemn,
For rotting your golden diadem.
you lost your pearly wings to flame.
Maybe now you'll learn

Love is not a game.

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Rain of Ashes

Contributed by aliengirl on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 11:55:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A rain of ashes
keeps us from truth.
Its raining ashes
through a sky
that is not blue.

Bring me a bottle
i'll catch them for you.
Follow the wind
you'll see them too.

Is this a real story
if the dream is not true?
Well trash me through Glory
when Sorrow is through.

Poison your lover,
darken her hue,
watch her soul hover,
she was late for her que.

Follow the rhythym
with a rhyme and a verse.
Do you feel safe with him
with a mind so perverse?

Cry to your god
that will act in reverse.
No power will help you
get rid of this curse.

Escape from this place
with no time and no space.
Remember the ashes
will soon strangle you.

Wipe away the dew
that stains through your face,
feel your pain burn you
for falling from grace.

Convert your requiem to a hemn,
For rotting your golden diadem.
you lost your pearly wings to flame.
Maybe now you'll learn

Love is not a game.

Copyright © aliengirl ... [ 2006-05-31 23:55:40]
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Re: Rain of Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 01:51:54 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this.

Very good job!

Greets,

Davinah

Re: Rain of Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by R0b on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 09:48:53 AM AEST
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Hey there, very nice write. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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