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Array ( [sid] => 121090 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I DONT KNOW [time] => 2006-05-31 23:16:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPINESS IS
DONT EXPECT ME TO BE AN EXPERT AT THIS.
YOU WANT ME TO SMILE AND IT NOT BE A LIE?!
I CANT DO THAT I WISH I KNEW WHY!
WHAT IS THIS EMOTION I CANT COMPREHEND?
how does it start and why does it end?
i feel like an idiot who cant understand
something EVERYONE ELSE GETS
...but i just cant see it and...
what do i do? what have you done?
teach me how to feel or be happy i've won.
I DONT KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN
WHEN YOU SAY I MAKE YOU HAPPY
I DONT KNOW WHAT IT IS
(what do you expect, I'm a failure at this.) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 315 [topic] => 75 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

I DONT KNOW

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 11:16:17 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPINESS IS
DONT EXPECT ME TO BE AN EXPERT AT THIS.
YOU WANT ME TO SMILE AND IT NOT BE A LIE?!
I CANT DO THAT I WISH I KNEW WHY!
WHAT IS THIS EMOTION I CANT COMPREHEND?
how does it start and why does it end?
i feel like an idiot who cant understand
something EVERYONE ELSE GETS
...but i just cant see it and...
what do i do? what have you done?
teach me how to feel or be happy i've won.
I DONT KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN
WHEN YOU SAY I MAKE YOU HAPPY
I DONT KNOW WHAT IT IS
(what do you expect, I'm a failure at this.)

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2006-05-31 23:16:17]
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Re: I DONT KNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by candyistoo-sweet on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 05:51:45 AM AEST
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i love this... so many times i feel like this and cant seem to communicate to others that happiness is just an illusion to me. i try to experience it but i dont always win. i like your use of capitalization to emphasize your words.

Re: I DONT KNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 05:52:59 AM AEST
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something EVERYONE ELSE GETS ?????

Not me. I'm clueless when it comes to things like this.

I love this poem though. I really do! Very raw emotion and you express it very well.

Tim
(who is really really hoping it is fiction and you're not really feeling this way)

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