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Array ( [sid] => 120704 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => UNLOCK YOUR HEART [time] => 2006-05-24 20:24:58 [hometext] => Men cannot see what is right in front of them! ! ! [bodytext] =>

UNLOCK YOUR HEART

I waited for you today
My heart longing for you to come

But

With each passing minute
My mind echoed the
Knowledge that you had
Chosen to stay away

Still I waited

Wishing

With a force so strong as to
Crush all the noises of
The outside world

Darkness fell
And all my hopes of being with you
Were drowned under a
Heavy curtain of tears

Maybe

Another time I will wait again

Praying

Your heart will open the
Window that is locked
Keeping my love on the outside

Then you will come to me

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UNLOCK YOUR HEART

Contributed by MarLites on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:24:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

UNLOCK YOUR HEART

I waited for you today
My heart longing for you to come

But

With each passing minute
My mind echoed the
Knowledge that you had
Chosen to stay away

Still I waited

Wishing

With a force so strong as to
Crush all the noises of
The outside world

Darkness fell
And all my hopes of being with you
Were drowned under a
Heavy curtain of tears

Maybe

Another time I will wait again

Praying

Your heart will open the
Window that is locked
Keeping my love on the outside

Then you will come to me

Copyright © MarLites ... [ 2006-05-24 20:24:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by spencer on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 08:39:34 AM AEST
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this is a very good poem, i feel very simlar things when i'm with this girl i like. Lol as for the "Men cannot see what is right in front of them" most of us can but i get where your coming from!

Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 03:09:39 PM AEST
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In my experience, I see her in front
of me so well that I can see her
even with my eyes closed. Sadly, she
refused to see me...

This is a very good poem.
Keep writing! I'll keep reading.

-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope

Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:36:47 PM AEST
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I really like this poem but there is an underlying irony about not seeing what is right in front of you,

Den

Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:34:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, sincere and touched with the

longing voice of the heart.

Ben

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