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[sid] => 120429
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Too Soon My Friend
[time] => 2006-05-20 13:26:50
[hometext] => In loving memory of a boy not yet 18 who died and who was a dear dear friend
[bodytext] => something was wrong i couldn't tell what i had a bad feeling it tore at my heart i heard the car before i saw it going too fast heading for the sharp curve ahead i ran outside but it wasn't enough i watched as my friends hit the tree dead ahead i felt the crash the ground shook with impact i ran and called the cops but knew that it was just too late i ran to help i saw poor David pulling Donald away from the wreck but Ian was stuck with no way out As David pulled Donald to safety poor Ian had no chance to even unbuckle his seatbelt a kid not yet 18 was dying if not dead the car blew with shattering intensity my friend was lost among the screaming the sirens came but it was just too late my poor young friend was beyond saving they took David and Donald away in an ambulance but poor Ian was still there waiting for the flames to be put out i wish i could have helped i cried as police questioned me all i did was watch because i knew not what to do a friend died not because of beer or drugs but because of fun and fate and a curve that just didn't abate i live with my sorrow as does everyone now as a young boy died way before his time not yet 18 was all that was heard as i was lead back home away from the road he died too soon no one should die like that he had a great future ahead of him and now nothing instead i weep still for him as he was a very good friend i comfort his family as best i can yet the sorrow still lives within [comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 55 [informant] => halli [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
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