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Am I staying in a place I don't belong?

I'm happy now but what about tomorrow.

Will time drown away all my sorrow?

I have these dreams only I can see.

They're tucked away so innocently.

Deep inside my soul screaming to get away

But I must keep them in there till a better day

I have to hide them so they won't slip away.

i must suffocate them till I find a way.

I need a way to let them out slowly

And tell him he's not the one i see

But if it's better for me,

I must hurt the one I love uncontrollably

he who has never been hiding within my soul

Life unfortunately has never been in my control.
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Confused

Contributed by k2kdesigner on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:38:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Am I the one who has done all wrong?

Am I staying in a place I don't belong?

I'm happy now but what about tomorrow.

Will time drown away all my sorrow?

I have these dreams only I can see.

They're tucked away so innocently.

Deep inside my soul screaming to get away

But I must keep them in there till a better day

I have to hide them so they won't slip away.

i must suffocate them till I find a way.

I need a way to let them out slowly

And tell him he's not the one i see

But if it's better for me,

I must hurt the one I love uncontrollably

he who has never been hiding within my soul

Life unfortunately has never been in my control.

Copyright © k2kdesigner ... [ 2006-05-19 13:38:54]
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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Adriean on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:52:23 PM AEST
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Trust me when I say I know how you feel!!!!! I was in that situation recently... just know that if it is meant to be, then it will be... no matter what you do to stop it!!!! Best of wishes to you!!!

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 05:04:51 PM AEST
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We all want our lives to come out like we plan but life doesn't work that way but you can get what you want just not in the order you want good poem

Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by mama4lyf on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:28:07 PM AEST
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Great poem, truly liked it.

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