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Of how my muscles connected.
Tell them well of Loves I quelled,
And of amorous nights concocted.

I once said the sky is pure,
Such thoughts decively Eclectic,
For many times I sat reposed,
While Empires around me erected.

And so She said upon one night,
When once our paths intersected.
That Love can see and has no Eyes,
Such misconceptions, very deceptive.

Oh, Explain to them of why I fly,
Of my thoughts that She detected..
I will tell, underneath her spell,
That death is my effective. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Aquaelius [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived

Contributed by Aquaelius on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:25:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Oh, tell the Dead of why I Lived,
Of how my muscles connected.
Tell them well of Loves I quelled,
And of amorous nights concocted.

I once said the sky is pure,
Such thoughts decively Eclectic,
For many times I sat reposed,
While Empires around me erected.

And so She said upon one night,
When once our paths intersected.
That Love can see and has no Eyes,
Such misconceptions, very deceptive.

Oh, Explain to them of why I fly,
Of my thoughts that She detected..
I will tell, underneath her spell,
That death is my effective.

Copyright © Aquaelius ... [ 2006-05-17 06:25:18]
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Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:35:03 AM AEST
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interesting write. i enjoyed it!

wiz

Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 07:44:31 AM AEST
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This is extremely well written! I very much enjoyed reading this.

Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:41:12 AM AEST
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Well done , enjoyed the poem

Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:56:40 AM AEST
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No I don't understand.. but you have a wonderful vocabulary.

Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by MG_Akela22090 on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:48:56 PM AEST
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Hmmmm....this is hard to understand...I'm thinking it's about life's little deceptions and how you can never really tell the truth from the lies. But death is the ultimate truth? Hmm.....don't really know, thought I'd give it shot, I don't know how I came up with all that, but anyway, really good, I loved it!

Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:19:29 PM AEST
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loved it its about the lies that surrond daily life check out the one i wrote funhouse

Ame

Re: Explain to the Dead of Why I Lived (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:54:49 PM AEST
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This is definatley one of the best poems i've read on ths boards,which is saying something as i dont think that much. this can be interpreted in many ways, and I'm not sure how its effects me, but i applaud your words. You have a polished materrpiece here. You're words are finshed and well-connected and with a fabulous flow. The poem is practically contagious, well done.

xXx
~kei

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