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a love that is so strong and deep that i can't even find my soul
a falling so deep into his mind that i am forgetting about time
willing to hold my heart in his hand
i 'm pulling away but again he's pulling me in his direction
i can feel this affection
a dangerous feel piercing me into my heart
struggling to hold on to him because i can't settle the point of us being apart
a crowded masquerade in which my mind is clouded into the shadow of death
a love so passionate, so therefore i ask myself why am i running from someone who wants to love me
pour your soul into my hand
guide me to your presents
protect me from what i think will hurt me
show me this stairway to heaven
i'm standing in this dark ,cold room hoping for a answer
lights flickering off and on
rain dropping so hard
just once can i hear you call my name
my name to know that you still have this little faith in me to love me
just hold me
hold me so therefore i know you want lose me to someone else
i falling into his universe
like a potion that i have dranked, i have been curse
singing the same song i was singing when i was afraid of falling in love with you
tree-le de-le-da tree-le-de-le-da , it's the truth
i wish i had a rose for everytime i have pulled from you
maybe it explains why the rose is no longer red for our love
a shadow of a dagger pulling in my heart
one falling from the sky
a rose that has dyed on its own from trying to love someone who don't want to be loved
i am a murderer of your love
a vacancy of you
i am the reason why the rose is not red but blue


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Blue Rose

Contributed by seci on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 07:03:48 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets



i can't remember the last time i have felt this way about anyone
a love that is so strong and deep that i can't even find my soul
a falling so deep into his mind that i am forgetting about time
willing to hold my heart in his hand
i 'm pulling away but again he's pulling me in his direction
i can feel this affection
a dangerous feel piercing me into my heart
struggling to hold on to him because i can't settle the point of us being apart
a crowded masquerade in which my mind is clouded into the shadow of death
a love so passionate, so therefore i ask myself why am i running from someone who wants to love me
pour your soul into my hand
guide me to your presents
protect me from what i think will hurt me
show me this stairway to heaven
i'm standing in this dark ,cold room hoping for a answer
lights flickering off and on
rain dropping so hard
just once can i hear you call my name
my name to know that you still have this little faith in me to love me
just hold me
hold me so therefore i know you want lose me to someone else
i falling into his universe
like a potion that i have dranked, i have been curse
singing the same song i was singing when i was afraid of falling in love with you
tree-le de-le-da tree-le-de-le-da , it's the truth
i wish i had a rose for everytime i have pulled from you
maybe it explains why the rose is no longer red for our love
a shadow of a dagger pulling in my heart
one falling from the sky
a rose that has dyed on its own from trying to love someone who don't want to be loved
i am a murderer of your love
a vacancy of you
i am the reason why the rose is not red but blue






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Re: Blue Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 07:28:00 PM AEST
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very nicely done!

wiz


Re: Blue Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:19:43 PM AEST
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wow i understand just how u feel! i feel almost exactly the same way about a guy....i understand perfectly about what u r say'n ...its really hard is'nt it? awesome poem. thanks for put'n how u feel in such great words.


Re: Blue Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Countrytennis on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 09:00:13 PM AEST
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You really tell the story of your anger here. It helps to write it down sometimes. I do that very often when i am sad or upset about something. I understand the anger. Nice poem.


Re: Blue Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:57:17 AM AEST
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Nice work, conveyed truly well and handled so sensitively..




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