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Array ( [sid] => 119823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => EVERYTHING [time] => 2006-05-10 17:39:43 [hometext] => COMMENTS PLEASE [bodytext] => EVERYTHING

You're everything i've wanted
My wishes came true when you came
You are the one i've always wished for
You're beautiful and amazing
No one can take you away from me
You have changed who i once was
Into someone new and incredible
I knew you were the one
When i first laid eyes on you
The sparkle in your eyes
That sparkled like diamonds
Your personality
Everything is the most incredible
You finish that one part of me i needed
You complete me
Your mind is contagious
And i will never let you go
You are everything

BY BRANDEN GOOODRICH

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => BEE [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. In the future, if you are to ask for a spell check, please do not use word shortcuts such as 'u' and '2', as these just create more work for the moderators. Thankyou. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

EVERYTHING

Contributed by BEE on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:39:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

EVERYTHING

You're everything i've wanted
My wishes came true when you came
You are the one i've always wished for
You're beautiful and amazing
No one can take you away from me
You have changed who i once was
Into someone new and incredible
I knew you were the one
When i first laid eyes on you
The sparkle in your eyes
That sparkled like diamonds
Your personality
Everything is the most incredible
You finish that one part of me i needed
You complete me
Your mind is contagious
And i will never let you go
You are everything

BY BRANDEN GOOODRICH

Copyright © BEE ... [ 2006-05-10 17:39:43]
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Re: EVERYTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:06:39 PM AEST
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with the exception of a few spelling errors..
and the use of "wants" instead of "once"..
this was pretty good Branden..
(use spl chk)
you may get a more favorable response-

..good stuff~

B

Re: EVERYTHING (User Rating: 1 )
by ZforZachariah on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:06:13 AM AEST
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glad you feel good

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