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[sid] => 119802
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[aid] => mick
[title] => A childs death
[time] => 2006-05-10 10:01:40
[hometext] => I wanted to write a poem which had no certain outcome of the child i was describing. I'm unsure if i have done a good job and would welcome any guidence or comments (Good or Bad) on what you may think.
[bodytext] => Her face is pale, Her head is raised, Her hair lays gracefully, Her eyes are dazed. She looks so peaceful, She looks so calm, Everyone knows now, She's away from harm. In her mind she's in a secret place, She sits on a stone, waiting, Gone without a trace. Her favourite flowers were lilles and tehre they lay, Surrounding her casket, On that cold winters day. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 1935 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xoXOSaDiEOXox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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