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Array ( [sid] => 119722 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No One [time] => 2006-05-08 20:45:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => no one heard her cries
no one knew her pain
no one saw what was done
to her and her family

no one knew what went on
late at night behind closed doors
no one knew the shame that her dad
put all of them through

no one knew of the broken promises
or the heartbreak that met her every night
no one cared to listen to the pleas
that she cried to anyone around

no one knew what she planned to do
until it was too late to stop her
no one knew what would have happened
if someone had just listened to her

no one to help her
she decided to help herself
no one saw the gun
she shot first her father

no one moved
the shock was too much
she then shot her mother
before she shot herself

no one went to help them
no one knew what to do
so three lives were lost
because of

NO ONE!
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 48 [informant] => halli [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

No One

Contributed by halli on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

no one heard her cries
no one knew her pain
no one saw what was done
to her and her family

no one knew what went on
late at night behind closed doors
no one knew the shame that her dad
put all of them through

no one knew of the broken promises
or the heartbreak that met her every night
no one cared to listen to the pleas
that she cried to anyone around

no one knew what she planned to do
until it was too late to stop her
no one knew what would have happened
if someone had just listened to her

no one to help her
she decided to help herself
no one saw the gun
she shot first her father

no one moved
the shock was too much
she then shot her mother
before she shot herself

no one went to help them
no one knew what to do
so three lives were lost
because of

NO ONE!

Copyright © halli ... [ 2006-05-08 20:45:34]
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Re: No One (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:54:08 PM AEST
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WOW halli, um .........very touching write. hey things go wrong, and things do happen, for what, i cant tell ya.! Im sorry if there is a past. There is in MY family........and not a good one......If YOU EVER need to talk, plesae do so............I am here.!

Hugs,
Brew~

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