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I see the anger inside me every time

I hear stories that are different from other people

Other people that don’t even know how I really feel about you

And other people that are jealous that I got to you first before they did

I feel like every time I hear those stories I want to believe them and then I don’t

But unless you tell me yourself I will believe

But if the stories aren’t true, then we can go on with our relationship that we have together

That’s what I see…

Anger, depression, happiness, and how people really feel about us being together

Well I love you and no one can not change my feelings that I feel about you

That’s what I see.

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What do I see…?

Contributed by depressedsoul on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 03:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What do I see…?

I see the anger inside me every time

I hear stories that are different from other people

Other people that don’t even know how I really feel about you

And other people that are jealous that I got to you first before they did

I feel like every time I hear those stories I want to believe them and then I don’t

But unless you tell me yourself I will believe

But if the stories aren’t true, then we can go on with our relationship that we have together

That’s what I see…

Anger, depression, happiness, and how people really feel about us being together

Well I love you and no one can not change my feelings that I feel about you

That’s what I see.

Copyright Â© depressedsoul ... [ 2006-05-08 15:18:46]
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Re: What do I see…? (User Rating: 1 )
by ilovebrittany on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 03:47:38 PM AEST
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niice poem dude i really like it : )

Re: What do I see…? (User Rating: 1 )
by shaydie_lady on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:02:26 PM AEST
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Wow! That's really awesome! I love it!

Re: What do I see…? (User Rating: 1 )
by Shyne on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:39:15 PM AEST
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That's a good poem. Keep it up.

Re: What do I see…? (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:00:48 PM AEST
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I liked it. Thats so true, no one should care about the jealouse ppl. Nice Piece.

Re: What do I see…? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sparkz16 on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 09:23:32 AM AEST
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wow...im speechless i love this write it is soo true

Re: What do I see…? (User Rating: 1 )
by rapnificent on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:40:34 PM AEST
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When in a relationship, I feel that the majority of people never notice ow many envious people may indeed, be around them. I see that you pay attention to detail. That means it will be hard for you to go wrong.
That's one of the only ways to keep a relationship solid.

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