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Array ( [sid] => 119491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Frozen [time] => 2006-05-04 13:33:40 [hometext] => Sometimes I avoid people... just because of what ensue when we pass each other by. [bodytext] => In one moment the world stops.
Everyone freezes, the birds outside just suspend in the air.
The leaves paused in blurred action,
The Sun, the Moon, the entire universe rests,
Each time I find myself next to you.

And in that moment I'm frozen in your scent...
Memories of flowers and fields,
Of companionship, intimacy...
Smells of Spring, of fresh breezes and new fallen rain.

And in that moment I'm frozen in your prescence...
The warmth of fire, of soft blankets.
The tinge of surprises, anxiousness of caresses.
The strength and softness of Love... of compassion.

And in that moment I'm frozen in the thought of you...
Frozen in a heartbeat,
Frozen in a Pulse...
Frozen in the sadness that all this will pass.

And it does, and so we do...
And all that remains is the chill of being frozen...
The Chill of being alone.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 361 [topic] => 33 [informant] => aquaelius [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Frozen

Contributed by aquaelius on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 01:33:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



In one moment the world stops.
Everyone freezes, the birds outside just suspend in the air.
The leaves paused in blurred action,
The Sun, the Moon, the entire universe rests,
Each time I find myself next to you.

And in that moment I'm frozen in your scent...
Memories of flowers and fields,
Of companionship, intimacy...
Smells of Spring, of fresh breezes and new fallen rain.

And in that moment I'm frozen in your prescence...
The warmth of fire, of soft blankets.
The tinge of surprises, anxiousness of caresses.
The strength and softness of Love... of compassion.

And in that moment I'm frozen in the thought of you...
Frozen in a heartbeat,
Frozen in a Pulse...
Frozen in the sadness that all this will pass.

And it does, and so we do...
And all that remains is the chill of being frozen...
The Chill of being alone.




Copyright © aquaelius ... [ 2006-05-04 13:33:40]
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Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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normally i just read pomes while i'm doing other stuff and go straight back to it.
that makes you stop.


Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitee on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 04:36:54 PM AEST
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wow......its amazing how you captured so much emotion in just a few simple words.

I loved reading this.

~Kaitee


Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by JarrodLuke on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:52:49 AM AEST
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i could really sense your feelings about this person. its well thought out


Re: Frozen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:53:03 PM AEST
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Excellent poem. I know this feeling oh so very well.




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