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Array ( [sid] => 119459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => QUITE [time] => 2006-05-04 01:18:30 [hometext] => COMMENTS ARE NEEDED [bodytext] => QUITE

Its cold on a day with out you
My days are long
Is it stresfull with out me by your side
How long will it be tell i can ask
I lay here all alone
As the sun rises and the moon falls
My heart is deep
soo deep i just wanna hold you
And let every breath be with you
Your beautiful and amazing
I wanna search your mind
And see what i can find
What i can keep
I wanna hold your hand through the hard problems
Your like my shooting star that flys
Flys throught the beautiful sky
The night is full of stars
Like your mind is full of thoughts
And as im still here
In the dark writng
At this late night i think
I think to my self
Will i get this chance to try again
Thats all

BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => BEE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
QUITE

Contributed by BEE on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 01:18:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



QUITE

Its cold on a day with out you
My days are long
Is it stresfull with out me by your side
How long will it be tell i can ask
I lay here all alone
As the sun rises and the moon falls
My heart is deep
soo deep i just wanna hold you
And let every breath be with you
Your beautiful and amazing
I wanna search your mind
And see what i can find
What i can keep
I wanna hold your hand through the hard problems
Your like my shooting star that flys
Flys throught the beautiful sky
The night is full of stars
Like your mind is full of thoughts
And as im still here
In the dark writng
At this late night i think
I think to my self
Will i get this chance to try again
Thats all

BY BRANDEN GOODRICH




Copyright © BEE ... [ 2006-05-04 01:18:30]
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Re: QUITE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 05:08:40 AM AEST
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very nice


Re: QUITE (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:49:12 AM AEST
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aww such a sweet and tender write, well expressed!!

take care
Pix xx




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