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Array ( [sid] => 119439 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Think You Broke My Heart [time] => 2006-05-03 19:12:06 [hometext] => A poem inspired from the feelings many go through. [bodytext] => I think you did it
You may have
I'm not sure
But I think you broke my heart

It was there one day
Whole and together
Mended from before
No shattered pieces to be found

When you left me here
In this cold place
I felt something break
Something that had once been whole

The world feels cold
And my heart feels numb
Why did you do it?
Why did you break it?

I never knew when you said, "Good-bye"
That it would do this
Leave me here
With a broken heart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Bamber [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Think You Broke My Heart

Contributed by Bamber on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I think you did it
You may have
I'm not sure
But I think you broke my heart

It was there one day
Whole and together
Mended from before
No shattered pieces to be found

When you left me here
In this cold place
I felt something break
Something that had once been whole

The world feels cold
And my heart feels numb
Why did you do it?
Why did you break it?

I never knew when you said, "Good-bye"
That it would do this
Leave me here
With a broken heart

Copyright © Bamber ... [ 2006-05-03 19:12:06]
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Re: I Think You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:17:31 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I can feel the confusion and pain in this..
Jenni

Re: I Think You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:36:43 AM AEST
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I can relate. It's a good thing that even a broken heart will mend and grow from these experiences. Nice write.
Butch

Re: I Think You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:53:59 AM AEST
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such a pained write, one of which many will be able to understand, I know that I can. well written and expressed, you made it easy for the reader to feel your emotions,

take care
Pix xx

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