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Array ( [sid] => 119037 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bastards [time] => 2006-04-26 20:20:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Half of the bed is yours
This is not a lost cause
Proceed and pause
Right before you kneel for the lord
Draw your sword
Paint your face
To fit the sane
Sanitarian ward
Federal offense
Mail fraud
The letter closed
Sealed, yet imposed
To the elements
Which seek to transpose-
Their own fears
Projecting woes
Protecting clothes
Nude skin exposed

Once-

The freedom tower rose
In six years from the holes
From the ashes and bones
Gashes, cuts, and stitched up
Healed hearts
Beginnings often start
In places ordinarily thought of as dark
In some cases bleak
If you disagree now
Forever hold your speak
Show them the key
To the city, a pity, greedy subcommittee
Pet the fluffy kitty pussy
Roughly, approximately, she’s pretty
However, there is a little itty, bitty, tiny, teeny problem
There are not enough pillows
Or covers from the bottom

___________
_________________

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Lancaster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Bastards

Contributed by Lancaster on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 08:20:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Half of the bed is yours
This is not a lost cause
Proceed and pause
Right before you kneel for the lord
Draw your sword
Paint your face
To fit the sane
Sanitarian ward
Federal offense
Mail fraud
The letter closed
Sealed, yet imposed
To the elements
Which seek to transpose-
Their own fears
Projecting woes
Protecting clothes
Nude skin exposed

Once-

The freedom tower rose
In six years from the holes
From the ashes and bones
Gashes, cuts, and stitched up
Healed hearts
Beginnings often start
In places ordinarily thought of as dark
In some cases bleak
If you disagree now
Forever hold your speak
Show them the key
To the city, a pity, greedy subcommittee
Pet the fluffy kitty pussy
Roughly, approximately, she’s pretty
However, there is a little itty, bitty, tiny, teeny problem
There are not enough pillows
Or covers from the bottom

___________
_________________

Copyright Â© Lancaster ... [ 2006-04-26 20:20:50]
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Re: Bastards (User Rating: 1 )
by redtears on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 09:12:09 PM AEST
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holy crap! this is good! no, this is awesome! i could never write as good as this! wow!

Re: Bastards (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 06:56:37 AM AEST
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Message me the meaning of this poem please? Don't entirely understand it but the rhyme and flow is good and wasn't sure to laugh or be serious :P

Re: Bastards (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 03:43:33 PM AEST
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your flow is amazing in this poem!!!!!! And how clever with the subject matter. 5 stars!!!

Re: Bastards (User Rating: 1 )
by big_B on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:28:03 PM AEST
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that was pretty funny, but you need to wor on your rhyme placement

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