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All the fathers who didn't care / All the bruises / All the tears / All those wasted years /
All the times you never told / All the secrets will unfold/ All the poeople who are so blind/ All the crime/
All the loved ones who had to die/ All the saddness we all share/ All the homeless/ all the beer/
All we have and we don't care/ Every fight/ every breath/ Every death/ Every twisted melody/
Every hungry little kid/ Every sad Christmas/ Every ounce of pain// who do we blame/ do I speak these words in vain/
YOUR the one who haunted and taunted me.. you couldn't just let me be
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Society

Contributed by DesTris on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 02:33:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

All these christians who wouldn't help,Every mother who never dealt / All the pain I ever felt /
All the fathers who didn't care / All the bruises / All the tears / All those wasted years /
All the times you never told / All the secrets will unfold/ All the poeople who are so blind/ All the crime/
All the loved ones who had to die/ All the saddness we all share/ All the homeless/ all the beer/
All we have and we don't care/ Every fight/ every breath/ Every death/ Every twisted melody/
Every hungry little kid/ Every sad Christmas/ Every ounce of pain// who do we blame/ do I speak these words in vain/
YOUR the one who haunted and taunted me.. you couldn't just let me be
Society

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Re: Society (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 03:21:17 AM AEST
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Des Tris very well written, I really do like it. But, you have only pointed out the bad side of our “Society”; there is a good side that makes up our “Society” as a whole, not just the select few. So, please keep that in mind when you’re feeling down and depressed. Keep up the good work.

sadaddy

Re: Society (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 04:32:46 AM AEST
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Good write but I don't do society.
awesome writing and welcome to our global family.
huggs, smiles, welcome,
emy

Re: Society (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 05:56:42 AM AEST
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I like the way this was written, also the format it was set out on the page. If I understand it as I think I do, I may disagree strongly... I don't tend to think society "let be" by any idea which hopes to reform it is generally a good idea - I do think history shows us that, without social preservatives, society tends to run down fast, especially when the stops are pulled.

Good job, though.

Andrew

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