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Array ( [sid] => 118862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Other Thought [time] => 2006-04-23 19:02:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You said you LOVED me,
But I guess it was all a lie,
Why aren’t you talking to me?
Why did you leave with no goodbye?
Never thought we will end so soon,
After all we have been through,
I guess my drama got to you,
I assumed so many things with you babe,
I ask again, “Is this the end of us?

Why did you not explain yourself to me?
You let go before I knew it was the end,
You never gave me a chance,
Not even one minute to explain myself,
I question why you let go so soon?
Different thoughts cross my mind,
Did your friends not approve of me?
Were you embarrassed to be seen with me?
Did you not feel the VIBE between us?
Was I moving too fast for you?
Did you find a better girl than me?

It is not fair,
The least you could done is give me a clue,
Was it easy to forget us?
I miss you,
I cannot stop thinking of you,
I guess I will make my own conclusion,
Now I know I did not mean a thing to you,
I know you do not care,
Cuz you are letting me go.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ruthie1983 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Other Thought

Contributed by ruthie1983 on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 07:02:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You said you LOVED me,
But I guess it was all a lie,
Why aren’t you talking to me?
Why did you leave with no goodbye?
Never thought we will end so soon,
After all we have been through,
I guess my drama got to you,
I assumed so many things with you babe,
I ask again, “Is this the end of us?

Why did you not explain yourself to me?
You let go before I knew it was the end,
You never gave me a chance,
Not even one minute to explain myself,
I question why you let go so soon?
Different thoughts cross my mind,
Did your friends not approve of me?
Were you embarrassed to be seen with me?
Did you not feel the VIBE between us?
Was I moving too fast for you?
Did you find a better girl than me?

It is not fair,
The least you could done is give me a clue,
Was it easy to forget us?
I miss you,
I cannot stop thinking of you,
I guess I will make my own conclusion,
Now I know I did not mean a thing to you,
I know you do not care,
Cuz you are letting me go.

Copyright Â© ruthie1983 ... [ 2006-04-23 19:02:31]
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Re: The Other Thought (User Rating: 1 )
by forsaken_soul33 on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 07:11:52 PM AEST
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Im sorry for your loss. I breaking up with my girlfriend to.. But, it's not my fault. She lied and cheated, and i had to let her go. I just wrote a poem called "Three Years End" about the breakup... I know I will never forget her. I hope you find happiness.

Well, it was a beautifly, yet sat, written poem. keep. it up.

bye,
☺Mando☺

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