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Array ( [sid] => 11885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => When The Sun Comes Up [time] => 2003-02-03 10:00:00 [hometext] => I tried to imagine what a perfect day would be like from start to finish, and this is what came to mind. So I wrote about it because as long as I'm with Dean, my sweetheart, every day feels perfect, even without all these things, and even when everything around us is screwed up. [bodytext] => Wake up on your own
And realize there's not a thing you have to do
You slept like a baby
And you had the most amazing dream
The house is all yours
You've never seen such a beautiful sunrise
Turn on the radio
Just in time to hear your favourite song

The sun is shining
On the most glorious day there's ever been
All the birds are singing
And the butterflies are fluttering
Not a single cloud
Marring the sky's everlasting field of blue
And standing at your door
Is the sole one you love and adore

Everywhere you look
The world is filled with happiness and beauty
And as the sun goes down
The colours of the sky elate you
The stars shine so bright
They embody the ideal of true romance
Nothing could complete this
Like making love under those same stars

You stay up all night
Talking and making plans for the rest of your lives
You know with all your heart
When the sun comes up you'll still be in love
And spend forever
Just like this because you belong together
And for me, every day
Feels this way, perfect days just because I'm with you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
When The Sun Comes Up

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Wake up on your own
And realize there's not a thing you have to do
You slept like a baby
And you had the most amazing dream
The house is all yours
You've never seen such a beautiful sunrise
Turn on the radio
Just in time to hear your favourite song

The sun is shining
On the most glorious day there's ever been
All the birds are singing
And the butterflies are fluttering
Not a single cloud
Marring the sky's everlasting field of blue
And standing at your door
Is the sole one you love and adore

Everywhere you look
The world is filled with happiness and beauty
And as the sun goes down
The colours of the sky elate you
The stars shine so bright
They embody the ideal of true romance
Nothing could complete this
Like making love under those same stars

You stay up all night
Talking and making plans for the rest of your lives
You know with all your heart
When the sun comes up you'll still be in love
And spend forever
Just like this because you belong together
And for me, every day
Feels this way, perfect days just because I'm with you




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-02-03 10:00:00]
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Re: When The Sun Comes Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 06:08:32 PM AEST
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It does sound like a perfect day. I hope you can dream of this for a long time, as long as he makes you happy :)

Love always,
Em


Re: When The Sun Comes Up (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:03:44 AM AEST
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this is exactly how a perfect day should be... simple beautiful...


Re: When The Sun Comes Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 12:59:44 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful write. I hope you enjoy life to the fullest with your boyfriend. *S* Cynthia




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