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Array ( [sid] => 118822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CURRENTLY UNTITLED [time] => 2006-04-22 18:16:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw tHe ONLy tHiNg HeRe
ARe tHe wALLs
ANd tHe HuM Of MAcHiNes
bLOck Out MY scReAMs
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw i wAit
fOR mY RedeeMeR
fOR mY ONe LAst HOpe
fOR mY ONe tO tAke it ALL AwAY
fOR mY ONe wHO wiLL sAve Me
wHO wiLL sAve Me
wON't ANYONe sAve Me
wON't ANYONe cOMe
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NO ONe cAMe
ANd tHeN
NO ONe cAMe
NOw HeRe i stAY
ALONe i wAste
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw HeRe i wAit
ALONe i fAced
tHis wALL iN HeRe
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw it's dARk
ANd sO AM i
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw i feeL NOtHiNg
ANd i wAit fOR NO ONe
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
i Lie HeRe
ANd i see YOu
i see yOu, MY deAR
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
"it's Me!"
yOu sAY
"i kNew yOu'd cOMe!"
but i cOuLdN't HeLp
tO puLL AwAY
it Must be
it Must be A dReAM
"it's Me!
ANd i'M ReAL, see?"
tHiNkiNg Of yOu Like tHis
ONLY bRiNgs MORe pAiN
i scReAM tO MAke yOu gO
yOuR sMiLe fAdes
ANd yOu RuN fROM Me
i scReAM stiLL Yet
ANd tHeN tHeY cOMe
ANd tAke Me AwAY
tHeY put Me iN ANOtHeR pLAce
witH wALLs Just tHe sAMe
tiMe gONe bY
ANd yOu cAMe
NOw YOuR gONe
ANd i wAit ONce AgAiN

-April 13, 2006
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CURRENTLY UNTITLED

Contributed by jane666 on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 06:16:10 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw tHe ONLy tHiNg HeRe
ARe tHe wALLs
ANd tHe HuM Of MAcHiNes
bLOck Out MY scReAMs
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw i wAit
fOR mY RedeeMeR
fOR mY ONe LAst HOpe
fOR mY ONe tO tAke it ALL AwAY
fOR mY ONe wHO wiLL sAve Me
wHO wiLL sAve Me
wON't ANYONe sAve Me
wON't ANYONe cOMe
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NO ONe cAMe
ANd tHeN
NO ONe cAMe
NOw HeRe i stAY
ALONe i wAste
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw HeRe i wAit
ALONe i fAced
tHis wALL iN HeRe
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw it's dARk
ANd sO AM i
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
NOw i feeL NOtHiNg
ANd i wAit fOR NO ONe
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
i Lie HeRe
ANd i see YOu
i see yOu, MY deAR
tiMe gONe bY
NO ONe cAMe
"it's Me!"
yOu sAY
"i kNew yOu'd cOMe!"
but i cOuLdN't HeLp
tO puLL AwAY
it Must be
it Must be A dReAM
"it's Me!
ANd i'M ReAL, see?"
tHiNkiNg Of yOu Like tHis
ONLY bRiNgs MORe pAiN
i scReAM tO MAke yOu gO
yOuR sMiLe fAdes
ANd yOu RuN fROM Me
i scReAM stiLL Yet
ANd tHeN tHeY cOMe
ANd tAke Me AwAY
tHeY put Me iN ANOtHeR pLAce
witH wALLs Just tHe sAMe
tiMe gONe bY
ANd yOu cAMe
NOw YOuR gONe
ANd i wAit ONce AgAiN

-April 13, 2006




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Re: CURRENTLY UNTITLED (User Rating: 1 )
by redtears on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 09:41:58 PM AEST
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oh my gosh!!! i'm speechless, it was a very moving poem, wow.... thats amazing.... please keep posting!!!!!


Re: CURRENTLY UNTITLED (User Rating: 1 )
by gribbs on Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST
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you should title this wonderful poem..."My Private Abyss"...a true testment to a sorrowfully hurt soul...


Re: CURRENTLY UNTITLED (User Rating: 1 )
by TheDarkestofHearts on Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 01:56:06 PM AEST
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it a wonderful and moving poem. however, i had a hard time reading it because of the font lettering. plz, keep posting!




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