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Array ( [sid] => 118812 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life After Drowning [time] => 2006-04-22 16:16:34 [hometext] => *** If I were concerned with the logical order of things (which poets often are not, I think) - this probably should have appeared before Of Poets & Fire. Of course, I never did claim to be all that linear. : ) *** [bodytext] =>




It occurs to me now
That all that remains unseen,
Unheard, unfelt, unknown to us
Does not do so for its elusiveness -
But for the lost opportunity
Of unwillingness and inability.

The images that exist in darkness,
The songs that fly by on wings of silence,
The weight of transparent, paper thin
Contact lenses sitting, not floating, on corneas
Are never nonexistent,
But are often… overlooked.

The fleeting colors of so called reality,
The crash and bang of everyday,
And the heaviness of the clothes we wear
To cover up our own nakedness
Steal our attention –
And close our eyes and ears and hearts
To the everything-else we dare not know.

We are, it seems
Nearly always, half asleep
In our wakefulness.

Until - unless - we stumble into
That pool of forgotten clarity
And drown ourselves there
(in a half inch of rain water, even)
Until the lungs of numbness fill
And foolishness dies
So that we may, finally – open, wide,
Long neglected ears and hearts and eyes

And, by virtue of overwhelming awareness
Become unwilling and unable to deny
How we were truly meant
To live our lives.
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Life After Drowning

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 04:16:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems






It occurs to me now
That all that remains unseen,
Unheard, unfelt, unknown to us
Does not do so for its elusiveness -
But for the lost opportunity
Of unwillingness and inability.

The images that exist in darkness,
The songs that fly by on wings of silence,
The weight of transparent, paper thin
Contact lenses sitting, not floating, on corneas
Are never nonexistent,
But are often… overlooked.

The fleeting colors of so called reality,
The crash and bang of everyday,
And the heaviness of the clothes we wear
To cover up our own nakedness
Steal our attention –
And close our eyes and ears and hearts
To the everything-else we dare not know.

We are, it seems
Nearly always, half asleep
In our wakefulness.

Until - unless - we stumble into
That pool of forgotten clarity
And drown ourselves there
(in a half inch of rain water, even)
Until the lungs of numbness fill
And foolishness dies
So that we may, finally – open, wide,
Long neglected ears and hearts and eyes

And, by virtue of overwhelming awareness
Become unwilling and unable to deny
How we were truly meant
To live our lives.




Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2006-04-22 16:16:34]
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Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by luckedout on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 04:41:39 PM AEST
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Wow...incredible that is really good and straight forward


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by redtears on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST
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holy crap man! this is really good! i actually had to read through it a few times so i could get it all!


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:07:58 PM AEST
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this is a very deep poem that makes me think about things i never would have thought about otherwise. it comes to a sad conclusion of our modern world
~lexy~


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:10:15 PM AEST
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Oh Snem! I have had far too few of those drowning moments in my life for many months now. Thank you for reminding me of who I really, truly am, deep within my heart of hearts.

A wonder write....describing so well what is so hard to describe!

Thank you!
Carol


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 07:47:34 PM AEST
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I really loved the meaning this poem conveys. I loved reading it, loved hearing you read it. Your a fabulous writer. Peace, Laura

who really loved this....

We are, it seems
Nearly always, half asleep
In our wakefulness.


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:24:10 PM AEST
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This is a first for me! I already listened to your audio blog of this...this wonderful poem. So, I see you posted it, so I decided to read along and listen to it again. That is quite an experience. It is even more thought provoking, at least to me, hearing it again and seeing it...reading it...listening.

Gosh, I hope I am not being weird but it was like being to a live poetry reading by Snemmy!!!!

Anywho, no matter which, I feel like this is a true masterpiece.

You are a true artist, Snem.

Thank you.

Tim
:-)

*goes to do that again*



Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 08:42:02 AM AEST
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so uniquely done...nice job.

wiz


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 12:21:47 PM AEST
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A very intriguing piece of work. Food For Thought!!!!!
Thank you for sharing

Jenni


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 08:45:58 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT!!!! thanks for sharing such an amazing and thought provoking poem, everybody could think about this one... wow, great poem
shanna


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:05:55 PM AEST
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Wow, this is an awesome poem, it's really deep.

Take care.

Scott


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:03:27 PM AEST
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I've been mused by this..
(your preception on such things,)
all my creative life..

brilliant imagery...and very metaphoric..
incredible-

B



Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 12:24:43 PM AEST
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An enormous write my friend. Your magnificence is shining well in this piece, and while you may think this should have been written before "Of Poets and Fire" (which is one of my favorites of yours) I think that being linear sometimes can be boring. The better poets on this site are not linear.
This is a good companion (though separate in many ways) to the work "Of Poets and Fire".

A splendid all around job lanterned with true emotion, captured with your amazing original style, and laced with an ensemble of beautifully arranged words. Magnificent job Snemmy!

We are, it seems
Nearly always, half asleep
In our wakefulness.


A tremendous line worthy of being often quoted!

BRILLIANT AS ALWAYS!

SCM


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by John_Dawson on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 09:23:29 PM AEST
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The last verse is all I need.
Great work.

jd


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by ChildofGod on Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 04:17:12 PM AEST
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That was a very good poem it was also very deep and life changing if you let it be!
Keep up the good work!


Re: Life After Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 12:44:49 AM AEST
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each stanza, stands beautifully alone..
amazing, lucid awareness - there is much more beauty to be had in truth, then in butterflies or the blooming of buttercups..as it were - lol
this validates that..(and might shame as well, those who find its relevance almost too much to bare)

B





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