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Array ( [sid] => 118677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Love [time] => 2006-04-20 11:25:05 [hometext] => Based on true past feelings [bodytext] => Sunshine in my face
Your arm around my waist
It seems as though I have found my place
My heart begins to race as I try to get it under control
As it slows to a dull soft lull
As this all seems to mull in my head
Your touch awakens me and releaves me of my dread
I no longer feel dead and alone
Then it hits me that I am now prone to pain
This thought is then pushed away and replaced with thoughts of what I could gain
As my worry begins to drain and think
This is how I want to remain [comments] => 6 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Craze [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Sweet Love

Contributed by Craze on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:25:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Sunshine in my face
Your arm around my waist
It seems as though I have found my place
My heart begins to race as I try to get it under control
As it slows to a dull soft lull
As this all seems to mull in my head
Your touch awakens me and releaves me of my dread
I no longer feel dead and alone
Then it hits me that I am now prone to pain
This thought is then pushed away and replaced with thoughts of what I could gain
As my worry begins to drain and think
This is how I want to remain

Copyright © Craze ... [ 2006-04-20 11:25:05]
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Re: Sweet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 02:16:38 PM AEST
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Wonderful and Brilliant! If I am getting the gist of this poem right you would rather be open to pain, than closed to any feeling. That is a beautiful and amazingly deep truth that I wish we all believed in. Your write is searing with excellence. Short and sweet, to the point.

SUPERB!

SCM

Re: Sweet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 05:29:11 PM AEST
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The title of your poem is nearly the same as one of mine that I have not posted yet.....I am hesitant to post alot of my poems because they may not be good reads as they a little depressing. but I guess that comes from the pain of love.

I liked your expressive feelings and emotions here. Good flow. Very good job!

katt

Re: Sweet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 02:07:11 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this poem. The rhyme and overall flow was just amazing and just felt good saying it out loud.

I'm looking to reading some more good stuff from you.
Much Love
Ash~

Re: Sweet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:16:51 PM AEST
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yeah, sometimes you gotta weigh the odds and the pain of heartache can maybe be worth the pleasure of findin' it. and this is a more pleasant subject matter to be sure.

D.Sapelo

Re: Sweet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Pain on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:14:03 AM AEST
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love it u hoe

Re: Sweet Love (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:46:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful.. I like this poem.. I can relate to this... Great way of capturing your emotions..

Take care
Christina

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