Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 08:58:39 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 118598 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hidden deep beneath [time] => 2006-04-19 10:59:00 [hometext] => please note this is not a romantic poem as much as neone may want it to be [bodytext] => Its so hard for me to express my feelings, hidden deep inside,
For whenever i try to let them out, they always seem to hide,
And its not from lack of trying, Ive done that many a time,
Even in my poems, its like im trapped by rhyme,

I want to say how i feel, i want to sing outloud,
But when i try i fail you, and barly make a sound,
I can never find the right words, to say whats in my heart,
I know its gonna come out wrong, before i even start,

But what happens when tomorrow comes, and you will not be near,
I think that day is coming fast, the day that i most fear,
For all the people we dont like, are pushing you away,
Secretly i wish they'd leave, so you dont have to stray,

And if you ever read this poem, i hope you realise its you,
For these are things i cannot say, but believe me they are true [comments] => 1 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 55 [informant] => -why_not_let_me_live- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Hidden deep beneath

Contributed by -why_not_let_me_live- on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:59:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Its so hard for me to express my feelings, hidden deep inside,
For whenever i try to let them out, they always seem to hide,
And its not from lack of trying, Ive done that many a time,
Even in my poems, its like im trapped by rhyme,

I want to say how i feel, i want to sing outloud,
But when i try i fail you, and barly make a sound,
I can never find the right words, to say whats in my heart,
I know its gonna come out wrong, before i even start,

But what happens when tomorrow comes, and you will not be near,
I think that day is coming fast, the day that i most fear,
For all the people we dont like, are pushing you away,
Secretly i wish they'd leave, so you dont have to stray,

And if you ever read this poem, i hope you realise its you,
For these are things i cannot say, but believe me they are true

Copyright © -why_not_let_me_live- ... [ 2006-04-19 10:59:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Hidden deep beneath (User Rating: 1 )
by TiaXander on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 04:02:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Love it describes exactly how I often feel and words just aren't enough...GREAT WRITE! really connected to this poem of yours:)
Tia

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com