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Array ( [sid] => 11858 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => It's Time [time] => 2003-02-02 19:40:00 [hometext] => Please tell me what you think of this..All of it might come true.. [bodytext] => It's time to sleep now,

lay down and close my eyes

It's time to sleep now,

It's my time to die

It's time to sleep now,

No more pulse soon in my veins

It's time to sleep now,

Never more to feel pain

It's time to sleep now,

I bring the gun to my head

It's time to sleep now,

I'll finally soon be dead

It's time to sleep now,

Time to leave this world behind

It's time to sleep now,

Living's the last thing on my mind

It's time to sleep now,

As I cock the gun

It's time to sleep now,

This in no way is fun

It's time to sleep now,

Tears streaming down my face

It's time to sleep now,

I'll soon leave this place

It's time to sleep now,

No more crying or hate

It's time to sleep now,

Sorry I chose this fate

It's time to sleep now,

As I fire the gun

It's time to sleep now,

My life is done.. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 36 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

It's Time

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

It's time to sleep now,

lay down and close my eyes

It's time to sleep now,

It's my time to die

It's time to sleep now,

No more pulse soon in my veins

It's time to sleep now,

Never more to feel pain

It's time to sleep now,

I bring the gun to my head

It's time to sleep now,

I'll finally soon be dead

It's time to sleep now,

Time to leave this world behind

It's time to sleep now,

Living's the last thing on my mind

It's time to sleep now,

As I cock the gun

It's time to sleep now,

This in no way is fun

It's time to sleep now,

Tears streaming down my face

It's time to sleep now,

I'll soon leave this place

It's time to sleep now,

No more crying or hate

It's time to sleep now,

Sorry I chose this fate

It's time to sleep now,

As I fire the gun

It's time to sleep now,

My life is done..

Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-02-02 19:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It's Time (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:54:57 PM AEST
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OMG I hope you wont do this,This is so tearfully sad,I hope you will rethink your problems out & try to deal with them! Take care Christina

Re: It's Time (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 07:54:06 PM AEST
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Your Poem is written wonderfully, But I hope you dont make this poem your last words!! You have alot of talent so dont end it here!

mckayla

Re: It's Time (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 09:59:50 PM AEST
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This was a beautifully sad poem. You have so much talent. Plz PM me I have struglled with depression and suicidal thoughts for a year and a half every life is worth living. Hang in there maybe i can help...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: It's Time (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 08:39:55 PM AEST
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i learned the hard way, its never that bad....so please, please dont do this... if you need anyone to talk to EVER feel free to e-mail me, PM me, whatever...hunny, it gets better once you hit rock bottom...

Lindsey

Re: It's Time (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:50:38 PM AEST
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everyone is telling u not to... i say its ur life do with it what u want... however, never do it because the way u feel a certian day. if u commit suicide make sure u are absoluty positive u want to... i saw some doubt... so plan it out if u r gunna try. that way u can be sure its something u want to do....

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