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Array ( [sid] => 118464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spin Me Fabrications... [time] => 2006-04-16 23:14:07 [hometext] => A somewhat sad , and maybe even a little dark even, poem about stories and fabrication. i hope you enjoy! [bodytext] => I need not your love,
Nor your affection.
Not even your smile,
Just a story, a recollection.

Give me a story; something sad and delicate
That turns and twists.
Here, take my hands
Write it on my wrists.
Spin me a tale; something soft and sweet
Like a strawberry at midnight.
You are the spinner, I'm just the yarn
Make me spectacular, knit me tight.
Weave me a dream; something smooth and silvery
Like the liquid moon so far away
Fabrications have no limitations
For tell me, who's to say?

Just tell me something beautiful
Unfold me something strange
Utter to me the pretty words
I could never find on a page. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 335 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Keilantra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Spin Me Fabrications...

Contributed by Keilantra on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:14:07 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I need not your love,
Nor your affection.
Not even your smile,
Just a story, a recollection.

Give me a story; something sad and delicate
That turns and twists.
Here, take my hands
Write it on my wrists.
Spin me a tale; something soft and sweet
Like a strawberry at midnight.
You are the spinner, I'm just the yarn
Make me spectacular, knit me tight.
Weave me a dream; something smooth and silvery
Like the liquid moon so far away
Fabrications have no limitations
For tell me, who's to say?

Just tell me something beautiful
Unfold me something strange
Utter to me the pretty words
I could never find on a page.

Copyright © Keilantra ... [ 2006-04-16 23:14:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:31:17 PM AEST
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Very beautiful!! I enjoyed. This is the kind of poem that many people take different ways depending on their situation. Very nicely put. Great write.

Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:43:30 PM AEST
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Enormously beautiful and powerfully written. Your talent here shines. This being the first poem of yours that I have read, only makes me want to read more. SUPERIOR!

SCM

Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 02:59:17 PM AEST
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Very smooth and cleverly written. I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the great work!

Katt

Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by EmptyGirl on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:58:48 AM AEST
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I actually really, really liked this. I think your poem is very well written and I love the way your choose your words. Really, nice job. Thanks :)

Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:30:50 PM AEST
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Your first post my last read of all your work. I done declared and reaffirm the fact, I am a fan. Now just get out in nature and give us some of this writin' of yours in happy.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by rapnificent on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:57:13 PM AEST
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Your poem bring to mind, the song that has the lyrics that go: "Lie to me, I promise, I'll believe..."
Pretty poem.

Re: Spin Me Fabrications... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 02:46:04 AM AEST
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Absorbing, enchanting, lyrical and such oh so damn familiar sentiments. Well wriiten, great expression. A terrific opening post for your entrance to YPDC.

make me spectacular, knit me tight

Sigh - just so well said.

Spike

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