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Array ( [sid] => 118195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FOR SALE [time] => 2006-04-12 09:09:06 [hometext] => WELL ITS WORTH A TRY [bodytext] =>
Im feeling bad and neglected,
you feel like that when your rejected,
I no longer wear that small gold band.
so im free to hold your hand,

If my hands feel a bit rough,
its all the years of washing up,
If my face is a bit baggy,
its all the worry made it saggy,

If my eyes look a bit red,
its years of tossing in my bed,
dont sit there like a quivering coward,
if I was a jacket I'd be in Harrods,

Before I go i'll blow a kiss,
erm does my bum look big in this.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 7 [informant] => lillyjane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

FOR SALE

Contributed by lillyjane on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:09:06 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Im feeling bad and neglected,
you feel like that when your rejected,
I no longer wear that small gold band.
so im free to hold your hand,

If my hands feel a bit rough,
its all the years of washing up,
If my face is a bit baggy,
its all the worry made it saggy,

If my eyes look a bit red,
its years of tossing in my bed,
dont sit there like a quivering coward,
if I was a jacket I'd be in Harrods,

Before I go i'll blow a kiss,
erm does my bum look big in this..

Copyright © lillyjane ... [ 2006-04-12 09:09:06]
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Re: FOR SALE (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:27:13 AM AEST
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I get your point. Good write

Re: FOR SALE (User Rating: 1 )
by Syloss on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 12:28:15 PM AEST
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I like this. I think it is worth you going back and embellishing it some though.

Re: FOR SALE (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:19:25 PM AEST
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I like this poem very much. If you were a jacket you would definetely be in Harrods! Well done.

Re: FOR SALE (User Rating: 1 )
by samwrue on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:46:14 AM AEST
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very creative

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