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[bodytext] => forever seemed to long for me so i chose to make it start today i went to church, (which is rare for me) and sadly for you, i ran away. i sat through the horrible singing even though it was by a professional choir it was great going to a concert for free but god, they have made you a liar when i tell people i hate christians they wonder why if im 'one of them' just keep reading my story you'll understand by the end you see, it wasnt that the music was bad it was all on key and harmonic but the thing thing that bothered me everyone's actions were also melodic they all swayed in a zombified way and i tried but i couldn't feel god i was trapped in the middle of a cult meeting disguised as a church building squad all that mattered were the numbers they brought whether it be people or money they higher the digits became the more i found it funny funny that 'this' is what church has become funny that 'these' are the holy funny that 'this' is what they made god all because they changed him so slowly the world doesnt hate us because we dont sin by us i mean those who are saved they hate us cause you act like you dont and make them feel like we're enslaved p.s. i wrote this poem to show how mutalated the church has made itself. i am an on fire christian. i just look outside of the box. in this case, the box is the church. i look at it from the outside and cry. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 11 [informant] => abnormalpunk [notes] => Poem title deleted due to unsuitable words. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
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