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Array ( [sid] => 117561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => REMEBER US [time] => 2006-04-02 15:06:25 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS A COUPLE OF WEEKS AFTER I LOST MY TRUE LOVE [bodytext] => The day you left
is a day i'll never forget

all i wanted to know is
how could you break my heart and split

when i lay ans sleep and dream
all i see is my life floating down a steam

my life has hit rock bottom and i don't know what to do
because everytime i see your face i get the blues

lifes a ***** and then you die
but when you left all i could do is cry

my life has changed for the worst
and in the back of my mind all i could do is curse

all i want is for my heart to be put back in two
and for us to be together again cause i really love you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Tiffyo4 [notes] => Edited due to the use of a banned word. Please remember that this is a family site and bad language is not permitted. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

REMEBER US

Contributed by Tiffyo4 on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 03:06:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The day you left
is a day i'll never forget

all i wanted to know is
how could you break my heart and split

when i lay ans sleep and dream
all i see is my life floating down a steam

my life has hit rock bottom and i don't know what to do
because everytime i see your face i get the blues

lifes a ***** and then you die
but when you left all i could do is cry

my life has changed for the worst
and in the back of my mind all i could do is curse

all i want is for my heart to be put back in two
and for us to be together again cause i really love you

Copyright © Tiffyo4 ... [ 2006-04-02 15:06:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: REMEBER US (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 04:16:28 PM AEST
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i know how u feel im going through the same thing...hold on & hope for the best chances are, things will get better

Re: REMEBER US (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:00:00 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. Great way of showing your emotions. Hope that everything gets better.

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