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Array ( [sid] => 117442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My Life [time] => 2006-03-31 10:12:45 [hometext] => we struggle with the truth of our own reality, to realize that in the end, it's simply life on lifes terms...... simple yet complex...... and hope for a better tomorrow [bodytext] => I've never been a common man, to those who viewed my life
I've known a grief, that few men have, of death, of fear and strife
I faced a war, and came back home, to find more problems there
Disgraced, lost in addiction, and no one seemed to care

I suffer through addiction, and troubles that it brought
But won against my demons, from lessons I was taught
I found that it don't change your life, it only helps you cope
It would have been much easier, surrendering to dope!

I've never wished to harm a man, who'd given me no cause
Or turned my back upon a friend, who asked me for a pause
I've always tried to do what's right, and steer away from wrong
Tried to teach my kids the same, so they would grow up strong

I've known a life of sacrifice, but had my pleasures too
Tried to live my life with pride, no matter what i do
Troubles tried to sway me, and keep me from my goals
Those I learned to deal with too, it taught me to be bold

I've always tried to share a smile, no matter how I felt
Even through my hardships, and things that I was dealt
I learned that all my troubles, were from choices I had made
Always tried to do my best, no matter how it played

In life, I learned humility, sacrifice and pride
The values that allow you to emerge the other side
Making you a decent man, that most are glad to know
The rest I'll try to understand, and make up as I go
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In My Life

Contributed by dobad on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 10:12:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I've never been a common man, to those who viewed my life
I've known a grief, that few men have, of death, of fear and strife
I faced a war, and came back home, to find more problems there
Disgraced, lost in addiction, and no one seemed to care

I suffer through addiction, and troubles that it brought
But won against my demons, from lessons I was taught
I found that it don't change your life, it only helps you cope
It would have been much easier, surrendering to dope!

I've never wished to harm a man, who'd given me no cause
Or turned my back upon a friend, who asked me for a pause
I've always tried to do what's right, and steer away from wrong
Tried to teach my kids the same, so they would grow up strong

I've known a life of sacrifice, but had my pleasures too
Tried to live my life with pride, no matter what i do
Troubles tried to sway me, and keep me from my goals
Those I learned to deal with too, it taught me to be bold

I've always tried to share a smile, no matter how I felt
Even through my hardships, and things that I was dealt
I learned that all my troubles, were from choices I had made
Always tried to do my best, no matter how it played

In life, I learned humility, sacrifice and pride
The values that allow you to emerge the other side
Making you a decent man, that most are glad to know
The rest I'll try to understand, and make up as I go




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Re: In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:50:14 AM AEST
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I have been writing poetry for about thirty
years now and I must say I real feel that
every thing happens to each of us for a reason life can deal us some harsh blows your living proof that you dont give up I hope you are ok now God bless you and your family I have written a lot of poems about addicions if youd like to read them good write
Freespirt


Re: In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:59:30 AM AEST
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this is great. i love the way you kept the rhyme scheme through the whole poem yet still stuck to the task at hand, getting the right message and thought accross. this was amazing..had great flow with lines that all made sense and stuck to the story....and may i be the first to say..congrats on getting past all the hardships and tough times and realizing what a great man you have become.;)


Re: In My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 08:17:24 PM AEST
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beautifully written....may your path be clear and filled with Peace and Light




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